Jakada
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Nerissa Loop
🕑 Added 2023-09-02 04:10:07 +0000 UTCThere's definitely still some room for improvement but I think its definitely a step up.
Already started working on the Shiori anim a couple days ago and Im really liking how its going already. I think the Calli and Kiara animation had its moments but looking back on it, as a whole, I think it s like a 6/10. I will be correcting what I think was lacking in that anim in the shiori anim. Just a few things like:
-Flow. I think the start of the CnK anim was good with the deepthroat -> insert -> eyes -> mish, but I think it kind of falls off after that into just additional shot of mish then a couple shots of doggy. With how I have the Shiori anim planned out it should carry out that flow/momentum through the whole.
-Position variety. The CnK anim only had like 2 and a half positions. Shiori anim will have with two of those having two angles. The whole thing will be 9 shots including small transition shots.
-Making better shots. If I went back I would do small changes like the shot of there boobs rubbing together more of a side angle and zoomed out and had them like kissing or something too. Just small things like that
lastly is just general knowledge/skill that I learned from studies, small tweaks to compositing process etcetcetc.
anyway autism over, ill see yall again soon :y
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Jakada
Some people seem to have an issue when trying to open them on the mobile app, if thats what you are you using, you can try to open them through a browser app on the phone or on desktop and that seems to work
clayton dierking
Is there something I am missing when I click on the post it takes me to a link but the video won't play
