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Keely 3, 004

🕑 Added 2020-11-29 01:05:13 +0000 UTC

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Chinookfan72

thanks KT.. I suppose this is the issue with just releasing a chapter at time, you don’t get the full picture. I trust you know what you are doing.

KT Morrison

SPOILER ALERT!! Don't worry, this opening is almost done and the book jumps forward in time. This is important contextual stuff, believe me.

JamesIsAsleep

Thank you KT, I cleaned the above up and put it where I wanted it to go!

JamesIsAsleep

I'll put this back where it should be with paragraphs and context, thanks KT for recovering this. I think the concept of Maggie and Cole getting Keely involved in their relationship can only be understood if you acknowledge Max's involvement in their lives as him having some independent thought within it. It had a messy start, but the trio of Max, Maggie and Cole has been extant now for, I forget now, years. Suggesting relationship intermingling is probably a concept as basic as inviting Keely over for a dinner party so she can meet Max's friends in a typical monogamous relationship. That's at least how I could understand it, but it's all foreign to me anyways. Where I'm with you though, is the relationship between Keely and Max, from Cole and Maggie's perspective, was supposed to be a way to trial separate from Max, give him his own path. I think it makes sense what's happening when I remember I keep misinterpreting what the trio's relationship is and need to reorient what that means vis a vis Keely. I don't think sexual separation from each other was ever anyone's intention if everyone's hearts could remain intact. They all probably thought that reestablishing monogamy between themselves was a possible need, but since Keely is so down to clown we know that they can have their cake (Cole and Maggie can move on from Max, Max can have his own flourishing relationship that doesn't involve them) and eat it too (meaning obviously that they get to eat Keely out ... 😀). But the above is at least in part utilizing the benefit of hindsight, meaning we know where things ended between all four of them and how strong it looked. Its still a mystery how they thought they could pull this off given the gravity of the events surrounding their relationships together at the point they are in the story. Can't wait to see how KT pulls that off! KT, please feel free to make pulling that off as messy as humanly possible.

KT Morrison

From JamesIsAsleep: I think the concept of Maggie and Cole getting Keely involved in their relationship can only be understood if you acknowledge Max's involvement in their lives as him having some independent thought within it. It had a messy start, but the trio of Max, Maggie and Cole has been extant now for, I forget now, years. Suggesting relationship intermingling is probably a concept as basic as inviting Keely over for a dinner party so she can meet Max's friends in a typical monogamous relationship. That's at least how I could understand it, but it's all foreign to me anyways. Where I'm with you though, is the relationship between Keely and Max, from Cole and Maggie's perspective, was supposed to be a way to trial separate from Max, give him his own path. I think it makes sense what's happening when I remember I keep misinterpreting what the trio's relationship is and need to reorient what that means vis a vis Keely. I don't think separation from each other was ever anyone's intention if everyone's hearts could remain intact. They all probably thought that reestablishing monogamy between themselves was a possible need, but since Keely is so down to clown that we know that they can have their cake (Cole and Maggie can move on from Max, Max can have his own flourishing relationship that doesn't involve them) and eat it too (meaning obviously that they get to eat Keely out ... 😀). But the above is at least in part utilizing the benefit of hindsight, meaning we know where things ended between all four of them and how strong it looked. Its still a mystery how they thought they could pull this off given the gravity of the events surrounding their relationships together at the point they are in the story. Can't wait to see how KT pulls that off!

KT Morrison

Here we go...

JamesIsAsleep

Good morning! Could you? That would be appreciated!

KT Morrison

JamesIsAsleep, I got your post and it was excellent!! With your permission, I'll post it here...

KT Morrison

Sorry you're feeling lost, DnD, and I get what you're saying. Please hang in there and trust I know what I'm doing! (Now I really hope I know what I'm doing)

KT Morrison

Stay tuned...

KT Morrison

Thank you!

JamesIsAsleep

Dammit what happened to my post to you guys, I hope you got emails because I am mad it didn't publish. All I wanted to do after that was implore to KT that she make the road to a strong relationship between Max and Keely as messy as possible as a joke but I think I did too much editing of the original post and it caused the app to freak out.

DavidnDaria

Sincerely, while my wife might get this chapter, I don't. I don't. I mean I understand what's happening, but why? Is it just hedonistic? Is it because Maggie/Cole want it? I mean, is Max going to find out about this? I remember writing a comment about the iPad FaceTime bug over a year ago, but I guess I'm losing the plot. Maybe I'll get it back.

Mike Monroe

Well....Loved that Keely was involved...I get mix emotions about Cole and Maggie...I Hate to Love them...Its really cant stand them...but they are a package deal....Again Cole lusting after something Max has...Granted he slept with Keely 1st when she was a freshman with them at Farm....But okay after the betrayal by him and Maggie toward Max...Here he is again wanting something Max has. Love the gang as a whole ...but Cole I have definitely a Hate Hate Love thing....this just speaks to KT writing and how invested you get with her characters..Bravo KT...cant wait for more!

JamesIsAsleep

So we get a little more from Cole's vantage point, really interesting. Love Cole and Keely getting these moments together by themselves for my own selfish reasons, but yet this interaction feels platonic enough (at least outwardly) and I enjoy that for what it is too. It'd be interesting to know if Keely gets a lady boner around Cole ...😂

JamesIsAsleep

I hope Keely sees it, your scenario on how it gets the ball rolling makes sense too. I hope it revs Keely's own engines, independent to that of Max's. If she sees it she'll probably laugh it off after the initial shock wears off. I can fully see Keely and Cole parting ways with Keely blissfully unaware with Cole's situation and it comes down to Max bringing it up, but we'll see!

Chinookfan72

Personally not a fan of the focus of this story being on Maggie and Cole. Was hoping we’d get a new bull in the story or it would jump over what has already occurred in The last Maggie story.

JL23

Ok, so Cole isn't as in control as I thought lol. Couple things....first, Keely ABSOLUTELY noticed he had a hard on, or will notice it. Second, she ABSOLUTELY will be using this to get Max's motor running over the weekend. And it will only plant the seed in Max's head that watching Keely get pummeled by Cole is more than a fantasy. Cole can sit back now, that chubby did all his work for him

VN

Super chapter


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