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Devil In The Waters, Book 7, Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2021-03-25 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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HTO

I have seen this as a coming of age or the story of a young woman finding, then claiming her sexual independence. It's Kimmy's story. Josh and Devlin are her facilitators. But what is Kimmy's game? Is Devlin in or it? (Toronto to the Caymens is a long trip for a long shot at Kimmy,) While it's clear that Josh is going to take a deep fall, will Kimmy have the desire left to help pick him up? Or, is her professed love for Josh more of an attraction based on what they once had and she moves on and up? KT, I hope we find out. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

HTO

Welcome back KT. I pray you have resolved your personal issues and found some peace.

RCH

Good to have Kimmy and Josh back! I'm going to need more time(like Josh) to process. This is hot nasty sex yes! but is it a lead in to Josh asking her to have Devlin or is it going to be the moment that Josh sees the truth as to what has been happening? Angst abounds! Josh is getting a better understand of what is in his own head. I find Josh internal dialog interesting. Devlin's insight of Josh not even asking for what he wants let alone just taking it. Devlin, gets what he wants because he is willing to take it. Josh, up to now hasn't even been willing to ask! These men are complete opposite. Josh is the type that would wait to be last in line and get the last piece of cake with no frosting on it. Devlin is the kid that sneaked in and eat the piece with the large frosting decoration on it. When caught he would charm his way out of it. There is too nice. Too nice can be a sign that someone is too passive there is a middle ground be aggressive in your pursuits but you don't have to take advantage of people or situations. Lets look at the jacket stealing incident Josh may not win but not fighting back is a definite way to have your jacket taken. It's something in Josh's approach to life just take it and move on... It's not just Devlin I bet this is how he confronts most of things. KT said originally this was going to be a dark story so I don't know where it'll go with Josh and Kimmy. Josh stop being a door mat. Don't let Johnny take your jacket without a fight! Have a key in your fist, be ready to strike, take an eye out! Bite a chunk of ear off! Go Berzerker on him at least you'll be a legend and you may just win! Is it too late now? How do you win this one? Going Berzerker on Kimmy and Devlin now isn't a solution(I wonder what Cayman prisons are like?).

Donkatsu

Kimmy really knows how to make a (re)entrance.

Tracey52

So good that we’re back to this story. We’re really getting somewhere now! Kimmy definitely cucking Josh and he doesn’t even know. I hope we get told what happened with Kimmy and Devlin for that 90 minutes. Looking forward to where this goes when Josh realises the truth. I hope he doesn’t just rollover and forgive everything because it turns out it’s what he wanted all along.

CSH

Talk about a balancing act. This is really the most complex moment both for the characters and the story and both are exactly right.

Glaucon

Especially getting at the heart of what would get to Josh the most about Devlin and Kimmy and what that means to him.

Glaucon

Really excellent, I love the way you play with the inner worlds of the characters so well.

JamesIsAsleep

I meant to add, your stories may boil down to something very complex, but it still remains very present. All the thoughts that are expressed in your stories still feel like they are in realtime, despite being dense in content. Staying visceral but being really big brained about it, is the stuff of legends. I'm a KT kool aid drinker though so you could be writing complete garbage and I wouldn't know ...

Mike Monroe

Yay...Kimmy returns with no disappointments..Still keeping the fog across Josh..telling him the truth about Devlin...but he thinks its for his benefit..fool!!! Happens when wife on a pedestal ..can't do wrong..LOVE IT KT...worth the waiting..Kimmy working her hocus Pocus...makinf poor Josh think its his Idea for all of this.

JamesIsAsleep

I was trying to think of a way to quickly explain how well you jumped back into this story, KT. "Back with a vengeance" is all my brain can come up with. I really love how complex you make your characters in every story. You can somehow avoid their thoughts and behavior being an exercise in detached academic ideation despite the layers of what is being expressed in your stories being rooted in things that can only be boiled down that way. Its a drug, now I want all my literature to make me smarter and turn me on, this is not a fair bar you've set for everyone else, KT 😀.


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