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Devil In The Waters, Book 7, Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2021-04-03 00:00:00 +0000 UTC

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RCH

Glad you found it humorous! Over course there would have to be the usual disclaimer at the end that no baby sharks were harmed in the making of this film.

BNR

HAHAHA~! The callbacks are killin' it!

KT Morrison

Ha ha ha!

KT Morrison

Thank you!!

KT Morrison

Cheers to your issues, ha ha!

CSH

You can call it Requiem for a Penis. I’d rate it AA.

RCH

OK, this what is going to happen based on the implied possible road accident in "Cherry Blossom". This what I predict how this going to take a dark turn. The next day Kimmy, Josh and Devlin again meet up on the private beach. Josh emboldened by Kimmy's "truth" the night before boldly drops his suit and swims with Kimmy and Devlin. Josh unfortunately is victim of a baby shark that mistakes his penis for a juicy worm and is emasculated. The final sequence of the book is Devlin comforting Kimmy post coital as Josh is alone in a hospital room recovering. In the movie version I see a close up of Josh's tearful face, the camera pulls back to a wider shot to show a bandage between his legs. As the scene fade to the credits "The Baby Shark" song plays through the credits. Hows that for a dark ending!

RCH

Yes, I what to know the truth what happened in the hour plus she was gone.

RCH

CSH that is so true with exception of one story(Obsessed series) the narrative is always the chuck or the woman's. I just never thought about it! In the Obsessed series we get into Atticus head but there is pain there so while he is a bull he is also a victim.

Chinookfan72

Can’t wait for a Devlin and Kimmy chapter(s)

CSH

An ending where Josh and Kimmy split up and neither gets what they want? Both end up alone and miserable? That’s a definite danger but seems more sad than dark.

CSH

If we apply KT’s rule that normally the person with the least power over a situation should be the narrator, we see that Devlin is never the narrator. That’s probably because he is the one really in control. We have no idea what he really wants. Josh will definitely get openly cucked, Kimmy will have the power in the relationship and is now sexually excited by being cruel to Josh but as for their relationship with Devlin it’s really not clear at all. We have to guess what Devlin really wants or how he feels. I think he entered this to have Kimmy and Josh as a submissive couple. Kimmy is maybe more than he bargained for though.

RCH

Hum... That maybe the case Tim. There is a strong possibility that Devlin could fall for Kimmy. He is at that age were a number of men get the setting down urge. A number of factors may hint to this: The purchase of the condo. Devlin's desire to branch out on his own. His offers and how he treats Kimmy is different than how he treats other women there is a respect there. He knows he needs her both in business and life. This could be the path that makes this story dark as KT warned us in the beginning. Either way "Poor Josh" is going to be the theme going forward as he becomes less important and weak in Kimmy's eyes. Well that is speculation that will have to wait for KT to reveal her plan for Josh.

Tim ziegler

Kimmy was forbidden fruit for Devlin he’s such a ass,her and Josh were just a game for him.If she left Josh for Devlin he’d loss interest pretty quick.

RCH

Yet another fine chapter KT! Now as Josh will be comes down from he sexual high his rational brain should resurface and start asking those nagging questions. Now will he confront Kimmy or just suck it up? Josh, really dislikes confrontation. He sit and stew on something until he blows and then is no longer in control. It's time like this that Kimmy so far has been able to maintain control of Josh. A calm in control Josh would be able to better counter all of Kimmy's tactics. Unfortunately Josh is too easily distracted by her female attributes and now she has the added power of his kink about Devlin and her. At the very least he'll ask her about looking at Devlin's junk post sex. That could lead to permission or a request to play Devlin farther. We'll see were KT takes this.

Simoee

No revenge for Josh. I hope Kimmy leaves him for Devlin.

BNR

FUCK! I Love your work so much KT!!!

Tim ziegler

Any other book I would have stopped reading after the second one,but Kimmy’s such a bitch and Devlins a dick I was hoping for some payback or revenge for Josh,but doesn’t look like it’s going to happen.

CSH

Kimmy cheating is his worst fear. I think for Josh it’s like having all the warning signs of cancer but ignoring it because you are so afraid it’s true. If he trusts her he gets his darkest secret fantasy sex and a promise of future marital bliss. If he faces the truth he gets divorce and misery and solitude. So I think no matter what she does, right now he’ll excuse it. He has trusted her too much to stop trusting her, if that makes any sense. At the same time, his masochism is ramping up big time and Kimmy has learned to feed it and help it grow. So yes, she will talk him into the cuckolding. I’m guessing his “dark moment” comes afterward when he’s already been thoroughly humiliated and he learns that Kimmy was cheating all along. Then he has to choose between his staying and accepting it, or leaving.

Wess

I feel like the obvious track for Josh is total cuck. As you say, the dots are all there. I am resigned to that but I'm wondering/hoping if KT has a blockbuster finale. I know she doesn't write a lot of meltdowns - Cherry Blossoms one of my favorite exceptions - but maybe a different dynamic for this story. The table has been set. Could this be a spectacular, awful and unthinkable demise for our happy married couple?! I must admit, that would be strangely and darkly satisfying.

CSH

I get where you guys are coming from. We know KT can write those characters well so obviously she is having Josh hold back for a significant reason. His following her to the hotel was the sort of normal jealous husband thing we are all thinking of right? The question is why is he not connecting the very obvious dots and freaking out, now. Eventually she will reveal it but maybe we can discuss it and venture guesses.

Wess

Agreed. I would have loved the most recent scene, minus “But it didn't.” Maybe our weak-kneed wimp could muster just a little hint of suspicion or, God forbid, anger? KT knows how to stoke frustration and a kind of futile hope for the poor saps. I love getting all upset by the anguish she so expertly navigates. I think I may have issues😉

Mike Monroe

Josh unbeknownst to him is getting bullied and humiliatied by 1st Devlin and now his wife...and she is loving it.. And its just getting started...I love the progress of the story..but it also infuriates me...that Josh is not getting it...its a story yes...but I just want to slap him...How is she so good at knowing how Delvin is this ...oh Delvin would do that...and Josh is happy as crap in mud. Welcome to Hell for the rest of your stupid life...I do want Josh to have a Geoff moment.

CSH

Wow! Just wow. Love how she used Amy to get directly to the point. Then she got off on making him come outside her. She has the conscious desire to talk Josh into cuckolding but she’s not yet fully admitting how much humiliating him gets her off. Great scene with lots of promise for the future.


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