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SUMMER SWAP // CHAPTER 25

🕑 Added 2022-02-24 01:00:06 +0000 UTC

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L_S87

Interesting you two note that, i didn't pick up on it at first, but after re-reading it a couple times, i think you're right. Then again, Scarlett's whole "i'm your best friend, you can tell me everything, i'm here to help" persona feels more than a bit thin. The whole Philippe thing might go back to her thoughts a few chapters back where she was thinking of him and Cody and seemed pretty adamant Sully was NEVER getting in bed with Carla. To me that reads that Cody's out of the picture since they obviously operate as a team. Which narrows things down a bit on the option front. If we'd never had that internal monologue from her, i would have never read it this way, but given her reaction to those thoughts...

KT Morrison

Yes, it anchors the flashback to the present within the chapter. So much easier to follow!

L_S87

This is so well done, KT! Scarlett digging for dirt (for reasons we're still not sure of) and the flow of that conversation vs Chey's recounting of her interactions with Cody. The obvious trepidation she has at others knowing about how she acted, probably because she's worried about how Byron will react to it. She was obviously a LOT more committed to this than Byron, wanting it quite badly. Hence her jealousy and projection. To bookend my comments from a few chapters ago, regarding disappointment. I had a mental image of Chey in my head, and she was a character i liked. Some of those teasers had me wondering if she'd had sex with Cody prior to the swap, then lied to Byron about it, hence the "getting away with it" comments. That would have let me feeling quite different about her as a person, and been rather disappointed. It's the difference between being caught up in the moment and having thoughts and feelings you know you shouldn't, but guiltily want to pursue anyway, and straight up Kimmying it. I can't wait for the next installment where we get to see just how those condoms wound up on the floor.

Tracey52

Much better segway to the flashback this time kt. Even I got it especially as it was in the same chapter. Loving that we’ve now switched to Cheyenne’s POV. I was bummed earlier that we didn’t have details about what went on with Cody. I should have known kt wouldn’t let us down.

JamesIsAsleep

Haha, it does kind of read like that doesn't it? I thought it was just fitting because he was there for the conversation, but it did seem like there was a bit more to it.

JamesIsAsleep

Holy shit ... I was so hoping for this to also come up in Cheyenne's conversation with Scarlett. I'm so glad she is such a good friend that Cheyenne is sparing no detail on spilling out the hot gossip. I also love knowing Cheyenne wasted no time when Cody came in, that is hot as hell. Cody had her all kinds of wound up. Lots of Philippe talk with Scarlett and Cheyenne, I wonder if that's just because he was there when the subject was broached, or if the author is hinting at something in the future! Last but not least, I really like these characters! This is a great story so far.

Glaucon

lol love Scarlet's subtlety: "yeah, yeah, that's great and all Chey - so tell me more about Philippe?"


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