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Devil In The Waters // Book 9 // Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2022-11-13 01:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Mike Monroe

Really??? she had to give Devlin and bag for her supposed to be grown man husband. He is not a child!...LOL..nothing Kimmy has done so far is being considerate for Josh...All a part of getting what she wants!!! Love your writing KT!!!

KT Morrison

She had to give the overnight bag to Devlin—so Josh wouldn't carry it to the Jays game! It was very considerate.

RCH

Fun, Fun! Can't wait for the next installment! Just wondering where they're going to stash the body?

Tracey52

I struggled early because of the deceit and bullying angle but I’m loving it now. Not really sure why, other than kt is awesome and I’d read a book about calculus if it was written by kt.

Mike Monroe

Agreed..but it's like a car crash just can't help looking or wanting to see the damage. KT is just a great writer!!!

Tim ziegler

With a wife like Kimmy who needs enemies,I dislike these characters so much I’m doing the Evelyn Wood speed reading just to know what’s going on.

CSH

Good point, that Devlin wanted Kimmy since high school. Hadn’t thought of that. Yeah, I get it. Not saying he should just cave. That would likely ruin the story, anyway. Just pointing out that he also really likes what’s happening in what he himself sees as a sick twisted way that he can’t help.The well adjusted response would be to accept it and leave her. Josh, it turns out, is not well adjusted. That KT has made all this actually work is exceptional. Not intending to denigrate anyone else’s response to the story, I’m just having fun with it.

L_S87

I think you are somewhat right, but I disagree about Josh's importance. I think Kimmy is the prize, and this is payback for Josh "taking" what he didn't deserve and should have been his because Devlin has coveted Kimmy since high school. I, personally, am not interested in revenge. Josh isn't vindictive, he wouldn't go for that on Kimmy or Devlin. But I do think it makes no sense for someone who cries in a hotel parking lot and feels physical pain over the thought Kimmy MIGHT be cheating, or who throws up when she "admits" she flashed Devlin, to suddenly be okay with months of infidelity thrown in his face. No one likes to be lied to, or manipulated, even more so by someone you love and trust. Remember how twisted up he was over Kimmy taking so long to get back on the trip? Then she lies about why she was late. Kimmy has told him thousands of lies. How can you have a partner to explore with, which is how Kimmy has portrayed this, when your "partner" never tells you the truth? Kimmy has it right, Josh would leave if he knows the full depth of her deception, not because he hates her for being with Devlin, but because of how many lies and manipulations she's twisted him up with for her own enjoyment.

Mike Monroe

Not missing the point...I know that this will most likely be another weak husband just accepting what ever scraps he gets from a ruthless wife and a her bully affair partner. I however don't think Josh need any of this. Especially how this has gone down. He has not asked for any of this. It happening to him...2 choices accept the lies and Decit from the love of his life or leave her with some dignity....If keeping with how most of these go it would be just accept it because he shouldn't have be able to get Kimmy anyway. They both have no respect for him anyway.

CSH

Certainly an inflection point. This is well done, KT. This surprised me. Devlin has just offered the whip to Josh with the choice of throwing it down and walking away or using it to beat himself mercilessly. His response is likely fore ordained and we can look forward to massive angst. We discussed varieties of humiliation in a poll earlier. In subtle ways this is more insidious and painful than any of those crude techniques as it makes Josh complicit in his own suffering. Death by a thousand self-inflicted cuts. Do we get no confrontation and a series of subsequent similar humiliations? That would be wonderfully excruciating for poor Josh. Kimmy would love it, too. It fits her past actions. I remember Kimmy did something similar with her panties early on after meeting Devlin outside the restaurant but Josh never saw the evidence. Those looking for Josh to man up and seek revenge miss the point. These three all need each other for this to work. Devlin needs Josh to accept and embrace his masochism just as he has been teaching Kimmy to embrace hurting Josh. I still maintain the whole affair with Kimmy is to gain control over Josh. Kimmy is a bonus prize.

L_S87

Hmm, I find the advice Devlin gave to be interesting, because amongst all that dickish behavior, he actually said something honest and profound. Something similar to what Kimmy has told Josh in the past about Devlin himself. Josh still struggles to accept it, certainly won't from this source. And then there is the panties. I wonder if Kimmy knew Devlin placed them there and let it happen or if this is 100% Devlin. It's not like she can't get out if this. Josh loves her and trusts her so much, too much, that she could simply lie and say she gave them to Devlin as a part of furthering her and Josh's partnership of exploration, similar to how she "only" flashed Devlin a few books ago. The question is, does she actually do that? Does Josh actually confront her about it or does he use that as a springboard to dig for more info? Does it turn him on or does it make him angry? The one thing I find missing here is when he ponders that photo and his suspicions, he doesn't really seem to think of Kimmy in relation to them. We don't really get any sort if input or feel on Josh's emotions in regards to Kimmy's potential lies and deception. I find that odd, and wonder where his thoughts will lead once that does come up.

Tracey52

Well played Devlin. He set this up. Now will see if Josh reacts like Devlin thinks. Devlin was nice to him all night then sucker punched him. Even told him how he should react in his conversation about Rumble. Josh won’t say anything because he thinks Devlin will expect him to and doesn’t want to give Devlin power. Secondly, the thought will turn him on now that he can’t deny it. Third, he has got to look at the phone now.

Mike Monroe

There is the BIG Slap in the face! How can he ignore this evidence! He has to know the smell of his wife perfume...This can't be a imagination. He wife packs him a overnight bag?? She could have given it to him when she dropped him off. He is like a little boy. The disrespect of it all. His GUT is screaming.. spider sense tickling!!! Danger Will Robinson Danger!!! He can't continue to being oblivious to what happening .. Hire a PI and catch these 2 bastards red handed. I know he won't though...or will he do anything??? KT ..you are a master of angst and emotions. No sleep now for Josh seems right. He should be making a B line home..as he said they didn't drink too much. Beside why the hell would he sleep over his arch nemesis house anyway NO man would do this..EVER

Donkatsu

Even de nial runs out of riverbank eventually, and the panties are better than a recognizable background; certainly less ambiguity. Clever SOB that Devlin. Don’t think Josh is likely to sleep well tonight.


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