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Rough Draft - Blood & Chlorophyll Ch. 11

🕑 Added 2024-10-14 17:00:10 +0000 UTC

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AFanofRoses

I'm all about everything about that! It's also so great to hear that this is approximately the halfway point of this story. While I don't prefer when stories push on without a destination in mind, it's always bittersweet when a good one ends, so hearing that there's still a lot left in store for Alicia and Katrina makes me really happy! In totally unrelated news: Tales of Berseria is on sale on Steam for 4.99$ until October 21. So needless to say there's a new game in my library.

Nyx Nyghtingale

I actually share your concern about the latter half of the book not having enough cutesy romance, and I'm putting a lot of effort into finding a way to strike a good balance between the two. Alicia and Katrina's relationship still has a lot of room to grow, after all; I refuse to be the person who stops caring about the romance after the kiss. Honestly, I'm just as interested in writing two people in a relationship as I am in writing two people courting each other. Good find on the typo! I've actually already found a few others too XD

AFanofRoses

Another great chapter! At this point, I'm afraid of everyone going into the Dungeon because it might abate the lesbian antics. But the show must go on, so what will be will be. I had no problem with the conversation between Alicia and Elias. One of your concerns was that it felt too convenient, and while it frankly is convenient that two of the few people Alicia talks with after four years of solitude (Katrina and Elias) are people she gets along really well with, I think it fits really well in the story. From my perspective, it teaches the lesson that if you put yourself out there and meet new people, you may be surprised by how nice, trusting, and sympathetic they are. Since both Alicia and Elias touch on the idea of being in a rut and trying to break out of it, I get the feeling that this story about Vampire gays and Dryad gays may be trying to impart morals to us Human gays / straights / in-betweens as well. In return, please allow me to impart my wisdom onto you about this mistake that I found. [ . . . others needed to be folded, and she entre an entire drawer just for her jeans.] Fun fact: in Spanish, French, and probably a few other Germanic languages, "entre" means "between." In English, I'm pretty sure it doesn't mean anything.


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