Nyx Nyghtingale
patreon
Rough Draft - Blood & Chlorophyll Ch. 12
🕑 Added 2024-10-28 17:00:07 +0000 UTChttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1EFQWOaSFgXfzaKoX3PdS2hMa6JxtnRr2QjQt2PleAQQ/edit?usp=sharing
—
“Oh! That’s Tabitha!” Katrina said. She leaned in for one last kiss, then grabbed Alicia’s hand and led her downstairs. As excited as she was to spend so much time with her girlfriend tonight, she couldn’t deny she was almost just as excited to start seriously talking about the Dungeon.
Answering the front door, they were greeted by the familiar face of an Arctic Fox Beastkin. She smiled as Katrina pulled the door open, though her bright blue eyes immediately glanced down to focus on the fact that Alicia and Katrina were holding hands. “Good evening, ladies! I trust I’m not interrupting anything, am I? You’re just friends, if I remember correctly.”
Alicia pushed past Katrina, playfully poking Tabitha’s arm as she spoke. “Oh hush. I’ll have you know we’re officially dating now!”
Tabitha sighed in relief. “Oh thank goodness. I’m not a Succubus, but I swear I could smell the pheromones drifting off the two of you. I spent the whole walk over here wondering if I would have to play matchmaker before anything productive could happen.”
“I understand you’re partially to thank for that?” Katrina asked.
“Hey, you’re hot. I’d be punching myself if I had a chance with you and didn’t take it. I just figured I’d give Cherry Blossom here fair warning.”
“Okay, well, as much as we all want to talk about how hot my girlfriend is, we should probably actually get some work done, right?” Alicia said.
Katrina was furiously blushing. She knew people found her attractive, but being the center of attention like this wasn’t something she was really used to. “Yes! Please, let’s talk about this Dungeon!”
Tabitha let loose a hearty laugh. “Alright, I get the picture. Where should I put my stuff? I brought all my delving gear.”
“Let’s head inside, my living room will be big enough for all of us,” Alicia said. Soon enough, the three girls were settling in to prepare for their planning session. Tabitha and Alicia took opposing ends of the couch, and Katrina pulled up a chair so they wouldn’t have to talk over each other.
“So, how do we start?” Alicia asked. “I think I know the least about all this stuff.”
“Tabitha, I think you should tell us what you can do. You already know Alicia’s a Bulwark, and I’m a Regen Bard, so there’s nothing else to really tell. Once I hit Level Three, I’ll get some Spellcasting, but that’s it.” Katrina leaned forward, trying to play it cool while also immensely curious what a Mage Knight’s build might look like.
“That’s fair, my Class isn’t exactly common. Well, to get the basics out of the way, I’m a Level Three Mage Knight. I’m built to be an Agility Fighter, with an emphasis on swordplay.”
“Just swordplay?” Katrina asked. “What about the magic side? The biggest strength of Mage Knights is that they can effortlessly weave magic into their fighting styles.”
“You really know your stuff, don’t you,” Tabitha said with a smirk. “Yes, magic plays a big part. Some Mage Knights put more emphasis on the magic than the fighting, but I’m the other way around. My defining Class Feature is called Dimensional Blades. Anytime I make an attack, I can transpose the space around my sword to make it hit anything I can see. The farther my target, the more mana it takes, so it’s still a good idea for me to get close. I also have a bunch of spells that let me enhance my Ten, and since I’m Beastkin, they’re extra effective.”
Katrina paused for a moment, thinking over everything the Foxgirl was saying. She’d never heard of a Mage Knight leaning so far away from the magic side of things. “And fighting experience? How did you hit Level Three?”
“Honestly, mostly through cam work. Like I mentioned before, I had a fan that really liked seeing me in Dungeon gear, but I’ve got a bunch of people that like seeing me in action. I rent out gym space regularly, mostly places that have obstacle courses, freerunning tracks, climbing walls, things like that. Fans get to vote on what I wear, though it normally just boils down to which color bikini they like the most.”
“And that’s why you registered as a Delver?”
“Yup! I did a subathon a while back, and we had a bunch of stretch goals. One of them was that I’d officially register, another was that I’d collab with an experienced delver. I actually made a couple videos with him, some focused on combat training, and some were… well, also very physical, just less clothed.”
Looking over at Alicia, Katrina saw her blushing like mad. No doubt she wasn’t used to people openly talking about cam work like this. “So, we’re all fairly inexperienced. Key Dungeons are normally a bit easier, which will certainly help. On my end, until I get my Bardic Spellcasting, I’m only good for Regen. That being said, I can’t pick multiple types, I can either give out health or mana, and it sounds like there’s no easy answer. Alicia would benefit more from the health, but you would rather the mana, I assume?”
Tabitha nodded. “The more MP I have, the easier it is to stay out of harm’s way. Plus, the more distance between myself and the monsters, the easier it will be for Alicia to throw up her barriers.”
“Don’t forget that my barriers cost health,” Alicia said, finally chipping in. “Even in the best-case scenario, where no one ever gets hit, I’ll still be constantly losing HP.”
“I can also switch back and forth, it’s not that difficult,” Katrina said. “I’m mostly worried about Tabitha running out of mana at a critical moment. Though, since you have such a large emphasis on your physical abilities, I think giving out HP Regen is going to be the better call. I’ll default to that, and you can just call out when you need mana.”
“Sounds fair to me. Running out of mana sucks, but it’s survivable. Running out of HP? Not so much.” Tabitha shifted in her seat, pulling her legs underneath her before leaning forward. “Now, I understand you both are pretty low on experience, which means we could probably knock out a few levels just by sparring amongst ourselves, right?”
Katrina nodded in agreement. “That was my plan. We need to familiarize ourselves with how we move as a group, get used to calling shots, things like that. We have the whole neighborhood to ourselves, and I was thinking you two would benefit the most from going up against each other.”
“Wait, me? Why do I have to fight the Mage Knight?” Alicia said.
“I agree with Katrina, to be honest,” Tabitha said. “I need to practice attacking, and you need to practice defending. You also need to be the most familiar with my movements, since you’ll be the one keeping me safe. Bulwarks are weird, they don’t have to be on the front lines in order to block damage, but you still need to know how to move when you’re under attack.”
After a brief pause, Tabitha continued speaking. “Honestly, you should consider getting a weapon. I’ll be able to put out a decent amount of damage, but I can’t be responsible for literally all of it. On that note, what kind of equipment are we dealing with? You’re not planning on delving in jeans and a tee shirt, are you?”
Katrina blushed in embarrassment, having honestly forgotten about protective gear. “Um, I hadn’t gotten there yet. Money’s pretty tight, and I was trying to find people to help. We only just got our licenses last night; things are moving pretty fast.”
“I don’t wear clothing anymore, but I was planning on growing some thick bark around myself. I could probably make like, a club or something too?” Alicia held out her arm, concentrated for a moment, then watched as dark patches of bark grew out of her skin. She tapped it with her knuckles, then smiled in satisfaction.
“So, I only need to dress Fangs here, hm.” Tabitha went quiet for a moment, seemingly lost in thought. “I think I might have something you can wear, actually. I get sent a lot of stuff, and sometimes fans mess up the measurements. You’re roughly my size, apart from, well, you know.” The Foxgirl gestured to her chest, her meaning all too obvious.
When Katrina spoke up, her face had turned red again. “Okay, yes, I get it. I’ve got some sports bras I was planning on wearing, we’ll figure it out.”
With another hearty laugh, Tabitha continued. “I like you two! Y’all seriously need to get out more, but I’m already having a blast. You ready to get started?”
“I suppose we might as well,” Alicia said. Katrina could tell the Dryad was feeling somewhat apprehensive, and when everyone stood up, she grabbed her hand for reassurance. The two of them walked outside while Tabitha took a few minutes to strap on her delving gear.
“Hey, it’s going to be alright, Alicia. This is practice, she’s not trying to hurt you. You just need to focus on her movement, and get used to using your barriers to block her attacks. How do those work, by the way? They need to come from the ground?”
“That’s what I normally do, but I can actually have them extend directly from my body. That really only helps if I’m being attacked myself, or I’m defending someone next to me, though. Ideally I’d want to give her some space to move around, and just summon the barriers whenever I see something attacking her.”
Katrina pulled Alicia in for a hug, kissing her forehead softly. “You’re going to do great. And besides, even if you get a couple bruises, I can give you some regen.”
Alicia wrapped her hands around Katrina’s waist, squeezing tight. “Thanks, Kat. I also have Regeneration if I’m in the sunlight, so we have options.”
“Really? Wow, that’s really helpful. Maybe I should consider waking up earlier so we can start tackling the Dungeon during the day. I’ll get, like, a giant umbrella or something.”
As the two of them laughed, the door behind them opened. Tabitha was now wearing a full set of delving gear. It looked fairly lightweight, as presumably heavier equipment would make it difficult to engage with her Agility focused build. Interestingly, had Katrina not spent years obsessing over various delving influencers, she would have thought the costume was purely aesthetic. Most of the outfit was covered with simple, striking blue coloration that accentuated Tabitha’s lithe body, and gold highlights helped the design pop. Two short panels extended from the front and back of the outfit, falling between her legs while also giving her plenty of freedom to move around. The armored sections were focused on her upper body, mostly her chest and her shoulders, and the design almost made her look like a Musketeer. “Alright, who’s ready to rumble?! I brought my sword with me, but I won’t be using it. Alicia, do you think you could grow each of us a large stick or something?”
With a resolute nod, Alicia reached for the ground beneath her. Within moments, two thick branches had appeared, even sporting vague suggestions of a handle and guard. She pulled them free, handing one to Tabitha before walking out to the middle of the street. “Can we start slow?”
“Sure thing, Cherry Blossom. How about you pull up a barrier, and I’ll practice hitting it.” Tabitha paused for a moment before continuing. “Actually, if we’re going to do that, maybe I should grab my sword.”
The Mage Knight ran inside, returning with her weapon of choice. It appeared to be quite well made, though Katrina wasn’t familiar enough with weaponry to properly identify all the different types of swords. She guessed it was some kind of saber, or maybe a cutlass? It was curved, with a slightly thicker blade and a guard with gold inlays. She walked until she was roughly twenty feet in front of Alicia, then turned around and spoke up again.
“Alright, gimme a target. It’ll be good to let you see how this ability works.”
Alicia nodded, then summoned a barrier roughly halfway between her and Tabitha. “Have at it!”
With a smirk, Tabitha began slashing the air in front of her. It looked like she was simply practicing her form, except her sword blurred slightly with each slash. The air around the blade distorted, reminiscent of the effects of strong heat waves, and Alicia’s barrier began to twitch. Katrina moved closer to Tabitha to get a better look, and could see that each one of her attacks inflicted a matching cut on the barrier.
“Wow, that’s really something,” Katrina said. “And you can do that from as far away as you like?”
“I have to be able to see my target. Anything that obscures my vision will be a problem: other people, smoke, illusions, even these barriers. My own eyesight is also a factor; my Perception is nothing special, even with bonuses. I’ll be strongest in wide open spaces where I can constantly reposition, and weakest in the opposite. Another important fact? I’m a bit of a glass cannon, my Health stat is trash, and I can’t level it.”
The barrier vanished into the ground, and Alicia spoke up next. “But no pressure, right?” She laughed nervously, then picked up her makeshift club. “I think I’m ready when you are. Just remember that I’ve never been in a fight before.”
Without warning, Tabitha crouched down and lunged at the Dryad. Her speed was incredible, and she closed the distance in a blink of an eye. Alicia screamed in surprise, throwing up a small barrier from her hands. The Mage Knight, however, had swerved at the last second, circling around Alicia and tapping her thigh with the flat of her blade. After this burst of movement, they both stopped to look at each other, then Tabitha tapped Alicia two more times. “Two for flinching, Cherry Blossom.”
“I-I wasn’t ready! I mean, I was, but I didn’t think you were just going to charge me like that!” Alicia said, clearly flustered.
“Hey, that’s how fighting works. Still, I wasn’t actually trying to start anything, I just wanted a quick demonstration. Let me put my sword away, and I’ll grab my club to walk you through some basics.” Tabitha smirked, then walked back to the house to swap out her weaponry.
“You got this Alicia!” Kat said, jogging close to deliver a kiss for inspiration. “She’s just trying to show you that fights are unpredictable.”
“Ugh, I know, it’s just… this is all so real now. It used to be you and me awkwardly pretending like we weren’t super into each other, but now it’s just combat training. I liked the ‘will they, won’t they’ dynamic way more.”
“I’m not going anywhere, Alicia. Just take this one day at a time, and I’ll be here every night to cuddle up with you when you’re finished.”
“Thanks, Kat.”
They both kissed, then Kat moved back to her spectator’s spot for the real training to begin. With Tabitha now finished showing off, she began walking Alicia through the basics of melee combat. They talked about foot positioning, how to hold a weapon, and how to shift weight to stay on balance. They walked through a series of basic maneuvers, all for different purposes: defending, repositioning, advancing, and dozens more.
After the first few minutes, Katrina grabbed her guitar and a chair from inside, then returned to watch the training. She settled in, double checked the tuning just to be safe, and began to give both fighters some stamina regen. She had to remind herself that, as much as she wanted to conserve mana for the Dungeon, she also would be significantly more helpful if she could reach Level 3. It also looked like the other girls appreciated the extra energy; they weren’t actually fighting, so HP Regen would have been wasted, and neither was using any mana.
She also took the opportunity to extensively study Tabitha’s movement. With her Bardic Knowledge, she was able to commit things to memory much faster than most, and she knew it would be just as helpful for her to familiarize herself with the Mage Knight’s movements.
Alicia, for her part, was putting in a solid effort. Despite her obvious lack of fighting experience, she was doing everything in her power to improve. Over the first hour, her footwork grew more reliable, her ability to read Tabitha’s movement began to develop, and she seemed more comfortable with her weapon. She even scored a hit on Tabitha at one point, who put up a good show in pretending like she hadn’t let it happen.
Eventually, they decided to take a rest, and Kat quickly got everyone a glass of water. They all collapsed on the front lawn, one of them significantly more out of breath than the other.
“Keep it up, Alicia! You’re taking to this like a natural,” Tabitha said.
“We both know that’s not true, but I appreciate you making the effort.” Alicia laughed, holding her fingers in the water to absorb it through her roots. “Why am I learning to fight again? My class is all about barriers, but I haven’t even touched them yet.”
“We’ll get to those in a second, especially since we need you to Level Up, but you need to start thinking in terms of resource allocation,” Tabitha said, setting her water down. “If a monster tries to hit you, and you block it with a barrier, how is that any different than taking the hit yourself? Now, imagine you block the attack with a club, or a shield. The damage is blocked entirely, and you don’t lose any HP. Your stamina is a resource too, and it would be foolish not to use it.”
Alicia paused for a moment. “That does make sense. I don’t follow delvers like Kat does, so I’ve never thought about that stuff.”
“After the break, we’ll practice with your barriers. I want to see how fast you can make them, how flexible you can be with their shapes. Normally Bulwarks can spawn them in midair, but it doesn’t seem like you can do that.”
“I can’t, it’s a weird quirk of my Race and Class combination. I’m not sure if there are any benefits, though, since I’ve never explored it.”
“Hey, unrelated question,” Tabitha started, “but is there anything I could snack on?”
Katrina and Alicia looked at each other awkwardly, both probably thinking the same thing.
Shoot, she actually needs to eat.
“Um, I could check my cabinets? But anything in the house would be four years old, minimum.” Alicia started to get up but stopped when Tabitha started laughing.
“Don’t bother, I was pulling your leg. I’ve got some food for myself, I just wanted to see the look on your faces.” Tabitha continued laughing, falling back on the lawn before stretching her arms over her head. “Long term, though, I’m going to have to fill your pantry. Something to bring down into the Dungeon with us would be nice.”
Everyone continued resting for nearly half an hour. Tabitha didn’t need the rest as much, but seemed to be enjoying the quiet atmosphere and the cherry blossoms floating on the wind. Alicia was still holding her practice club, moving it back and forth to try and get more comfortable with it. Katrina’s music had never stopped, the soft sounds of her classical guitar giving everyone a healthy helping of stamina. Alicia clearly needed it more, but when Katrina asked Tabitha, she said it was also a big help. The Foxgirl hadn’t used much stamina during the training, but apparently she’d had a cam show earlier in the night that had kept her pretty busy.
Katrina was just about to suggest that they get back to practicing when a System notification went off in her head, causing her to flinch in surprise.
*PING*
She stopped playing, the peaceful guitar melody halting just moments before reaching a satisfying conclusion. Alicia looked down, concerned at the sudden movement. “Kat? What’s wrong?”
“I just hit Level Three!” There was a moment of shock, then Katrina started laughing. After years of staring at her Status, of using it solely to inflict terrible headaches in hopes of distracting her bloodlust, something had finally changed.
Alicia dropped to her knees, showering Katrina’s face with kisses in celebration. “Kat! That’s so exciting!”
“Way to go, Fangs! You said that gives you spellcasting, yeah?” Tabitha said, sitting up again.
“Alright, alright. Let me pull up my Status, and I’ll actually pick my Feature.” Resting her guitar on her leg, Katrina mentally summoned Status screen, and was greeted by a message she thought she’d never see.
***
Gain: Bardic Spellcasting (Lesser)
Choose one:
Bonus Spells
Barbed Tongue
Secondary Method
Extended Inspiration
***
“You want us to look anything up for you?” Tabitha asked.
“No need, I’ve been dreaming of this moment for years. I’m getting Bonus Spells, it’s too good to pass up.” With a quick mental command, the Status screen disappeared, and Katrina looked around again.
“Well, how do you feel?” Alicia asked. “What spells did you get?”
“Bards are a little weird, we don’t pick our spells from a list or have them randomly assigned. We have to develop our spells ourselves, come up with ideas and then iterate on them until they coalesce in our Status.” Katrina squeezed her girlfriend’s hand in excitement. “I guess this gives me something to do while you two get back to sparring practice.”
“Aww but I want to see you make spells!” Alicia moaned.
“I’m not going anywhere, and the process is honestly going to be pretty boring. If I manage to figure out any spells tonight, I’ll make sure you see them.”
Tabitha jumped to her feet, grabbed her practice stick, and pointed it at Alicia. “Alright, you heard the lady, Cherry Blossom. Back to work!”
With another loud grumble, Alicia grabbed her weapon and moved back to the middle of the street. “Ugh, fine. You said you wanted to practice with my barriers next, right? So, are you just going to—”
“En garde!” Tabitha shouted, cutting Alicia off. She ran at the Dryad, clearly taking a leisurely pace, and started testing Alicia on the maneuvers they’d been practicing earlier. As they fell back into a familiar pattern of attacking and defending, they started incorporating Alicia’s barriers into the equation. Their discussion, and whatever progress they made, was of secondary interest to Katrina at the moment.
She’d just unlocked Bardic Spellcasting, after years of dreaming up possible spells for herself. Thankfully, she’d just formatted everything for her phone, so it was easy to scroll through her list of options. Every Bard forum she’d ever found claimed that Bardic Spellcasting, along with the Bonus Spells, would give her a total of eight spells. Although her list of ideas had significantly more than eight spells on it, she had separated them by presumed strength, as well as flexibility.
Whenever she imagined being a delver, Katrina always assumed she would work best as a jane-of-all-trades caster. Someone that could adapt to any situation, while also providing helpful supporting magic so that other casters didn’t have to give up valuable spell slots for basic spells.
It was almost overwhelming, having to choose a single spell to start with, but she had to start somewhere. With an idea in mind, she started practicing.
The music came easily. After all, she’d done nothing but improve her musical expertise for years now. The tricky part was readjusting how she interacted with her magic. With her Regeneration Buffs, she only had to make a simple selection on her Status screen, and then let the magic do its thing. Now that she had the tools to interact more directly with her magic, she struggled to figure out exactly how to control it. She could feel an impressive amount of magical energy inside her, waiting to be unleashed, but every time she reached for it, she couldn’t pull it free.
Eventually, Katrina decided to go back to the basics. Instead of elaborate flourishes and dramatic arpeggios, she started playing simple musical scales. She examined how the music interacted with the magic, how the energy reacted to different expressions of melody.
With a solid understanding of the basics, she added a tiny bit of complexity. She played a consecutive series of simple chords, up and down the register, again examining how they resonated with the magic. After this, she tried more complex chords, playing around with minor diminished progressions. This iteration continued for nearly another hour, during which Katrina was completely oblivious to whatever Alicia and Tabitha were doing.
At the end of the second hour of sparring practice, Katrina finally felt she was ready to attempt a spell.
“Alright you two, want to take a quick break?” Katrina asked.
“Yes! Please!” Alicia said, perhaps a little too eagerly. She was clearly exhausted, panting and gasping for air as she walked back towards her lawn. Her face winced with pain as she moved, and Katrina was fairly sure she could see the beginnings of several bruises. Tabitha also moved closer, but Katrina held up a hand to stop her.
“Actually, Tabitha, could you help me test a spell?”
“Depends, you gonna throw a lightning bolt at me and hope I can dodge it?” the Foxgirl asked, crossing her arms suspiciously.
“Nothing like that, it won’t do any damage. It’s just something that might disorient you for a couple seconds. I don’t want to get into the specifics, or it might skew your reaction.”
“I’ll volunteer if you want, Tabitha,” Alicia said, her voice still panting from all the training.
Tabitha paused, tapping her fingers on her arm as she thought about it. “No, I got this. Just remember, I’m here out of the goodness of my heart, not to be your little Dungeon guinea pig. Where do you want me?”
Katrina pointed to the road. “Could you start there, and just jog past us?”
With a mock salute, Tabitha took her spot. She looked at Katrina, the two girls nodding, and started to run. After the first couple of steps, Katrina started playing. She let the music flow through her fingers, reaching for the music and using the melody to form a bridge. The magic bound itself to the song, catching a ride out into the night sky, and Katrina directed the spell at Tabitha.
When the spell hit, the Foxgirl immediately tripped over her own feet. She hit the ground, her hands reaching for stability as a stream of profanity erupted from her mouth. The effects of the magic only lasted a few seconds, and when Tabitha returned to her senses, she glared at Katrina. “What on earth was that?”
“I gave you vertigo. At least, I tried to. What did it feel like?”
“It felt like vertigo! It was awful! My head was spinning, I couldn’t see straight, and I’m pretty sure I almost threw up. Wow, that was nasty.”
Katrina jumped to her feet, running over to Tabitha and extending a hand to help her up. “I hope it wasn’t too bad, truly. If you want to take creative revenge on me, I totally get it. Honestly, I think Alicia and I should feel what that spell is like anyways, just in case.”
With a smirk, Tabitha grabbed Katrina’s hand and pulled, standing to meet her. “That’s not a terrible idea. The two of you trying it, I mean. There’s no telling when a monster might reflect one of these spells at us, or something like that. As for creative revenge… well, you already wrote me a blank check for a favor. Let’s just say I’ll factor this little escapade in when I think of something. I’ve already got some ideas, truthfully, but all in good time, Fangs.”
“I do appreciate this, Tabitha. It means a lot. Just let me know if this ever gets to be too much for you.”
“Hey, I’m a grown woman, I can take care of myself. Besides, I just spent the last two hours beating up your girlfriend, a little payback is more than warranted.” The two girls smiled at each other before rejoining Alicia on her lawn. “How you feeling, Cherry Blossom?”
In lieu of a proper answer, Alicia instead let out a prolonged groan of misery. She was currently on the ground, unmoving, and Katrina was fairly sure she saw a series of roots extending from her back. “I’m gonna be so sore tomorrow, ugh. I want to just pass out in a sunbeam for like, a week. That won’t be a problem, right?”
Katrina sat down next to Alicia, softly brushing her hair from her face. “You can soak up all the sun you want tomorrow, hun.” The Dryad nuzzled into Katrina’s hand, humming with appreciation. She seemed like she was on the verge of passing out, and Katrina had to tap her cheek to make sure she didn’t fall asleep on her front lawn.
“In all serious, Alicia?” Tabitha said, clearing her throat. “You did really great today. For someone with no combat experience, I’d say you’re picking things up pretty quickly. We’re all finished for tonight, if you two want to retire to more private affairs.”
“How did the second training session go, anyways? I was too busy with my spells to pay attention,” Katrina asked.
Alicia slowly sat up, the roots on her back detaching, her bones cracking in a manner reminiscent of an ancient, lumbering tree. “I definitely noticed the lack of stamina regen, for one thing. Otherwise, I agree with Tabitha. The movements feel a bit more natural, and I think I’ve got the beginnings of an understanding of how to protect myself. Plus, I used Class Features! That’s gotta count for something right?”
“How close are you to leveling up?”
“I guess I should check, shouldn’t I? Status!” Alicia was now leaning against Katrina, her eyes fighting to stay open as she started reading through her Status. Barely a second passed before her eyes snapped wide open, and she leaned forward in surprise. “Wait! I leveled up too!”
“Dang, look at you two! We’re on a roll!” Tabitha said. She was in the middle of slowly removing her delving gear but paused to slowly applaud Alicia.
“This is Level Two, right? What stats are you going to take?” Katrina asked.
“Um, it says my only options are Health or Endurance. I should take the Health, right? The more HP I have the better?”
“You’re our tank, that seems like the right call to me.” Katrina squeezed Alicia’s hand, nodding enthusiastically. “Anything that keeps you alive is a win in my book.”
“Alright, two points in Health, and… done!”
As Katrina watched, she swore Alicia’s skin grew more vibrant. She’d always had a bit of a glow to her, though it was hard to say how literal that was, and now she seemed just a bit more alive. They smiled at each other, quickly kissing as they celebrated their respective level gains today. Eventually, the intense physical activity began to catch up with Alicia, and everyone decided to call it a night.
Tabitha left her delving essentials in Alicia’s living room, then walked home to get some sleep. Katrina eagerly walked upstairs, taking a few minutes to brush her teeth and put on her pajamas, then joined Alicia in her bedroom. The Dryad had already buried herself in the pile of blankets, and Katrina kneeled down to figure out how they might be able to cuddle. As soon as she laid down, however, Alicia tackled her with excitement, showering her with kisses. She wrapped her hands around Katrina’s waist, nuzzled her face into Katrina’s shoulder, and was asleep within minutes.
—
I feel like this chapter is pretty self-explanatory! It's our first real look at the team prepping for some Dungeon action, and we get our first two Level Ups.
While there technically wasn't an action scene, there were definitely a few sections that heavily focused on external, non-emotional issues. Apparently I can do that? Anyways, it would be great if all the different, more mechanical sections are still interesting. This is also going to be where the whole "RPG" aspect of the "LitRPG" comes into a bigger focus. I'm sure some people will really like that, but others might not.
As I mentioned last time, we're not taking a huge swerve away from the relationship and the emotionality of the story. I still have a lot of plans that don't revolve around the Dungeon, Leveling, and things like that.
Let me know what you think!
(I even remembered to post the link to the Google Doc!)
Nyx <3
Comments
Nyx Nyghtingale
On the topic of their training, this isn't the only time we're going to see some sparring practice. It wouldn't make sense for them to be dungeon-ready in just a day, and I want to show them really putting in an effort to prepare. I've got some plans to show different types of sparring sessions as they get themselves ready, including different pairings and incorporating in magic as well. The isolation of both our girls was a huge part of their identifies post-change, and the latter parts of the book are going to focus on them expanding their circle of friends to create a makeshift community. I'm personally quite glad the book ended up like this, as I think it helps sell the feeling of "our girls versus the world", if that makes sense. All your comments made perfect sense in the linked document, and you committed no crimes of any sort!
AFanofRoses
Another good chapter! I appreciate that we're getting closer to the action side of this Book, even if it puts our precious muffins in danger. On the note of action, while it makes some sense to have Alicia train against Tabitha while Katrina watches and practices magic, I think it's a missed opportunity to not have Alicia and Tabitha on a team sparing against Katrina. It would give Tabitha an active opponent to fight while also giving Alicia an opportunity to practice her barriers against an active opponent, which seems like a valuable experience. Maybe they can do something like that in their next practice session. Or maybe they won't. Both options are possible. This feels a little weird to write, but it's strange that we're in Chapter 12 and it's the first time we've seen Katrina or Alicia in the same physical location as another character for the second time (I could be wrong about that, though). It makes sense in the context of the story that they both spend a lot of time with each other and little time with other people, but it's still very different from your other series that has a larger recurring cast. It's certainly not bad, but it was a bit shocking to be struck by the fact that the world has other main characters in it. I saw a few grammatical things, but I marked those on the Google Doc with the link provided. Be forewarned that my Google account uses a different username than this Patreon account, so I wrote in each comment that it's me. Also, if I did something wrong or breached some etiquette on the Google Doc, please let me know, and I'm sorry.
