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Rough Draft - Blood & Chlorophyll Ch. 15
🕑 Added 2024-12-09 18:00:11 +0000 UTCAlicia turned around again, trying to decide if her outfit would fit the occasion. A knee-length cocktail dress hugged her curves, with sleeves that ended just before her elbows, and she had no idea if it would be appropriate or not.
Is it too short? Too long? How much skin should I be covering? Ugh, this would be so much easier if Tab would tell us where we’re going!
“What does ‘club wear’ even mean?” Alicia asked.
On the other side of the closet door, hidden from view, Katrina was digging through more of Alicia’s clothes to try and find her own outfit. “I wish I could say, exactly, but I was never much of a party girl. I assume less formal, more sexy, and maybe ready to dance?”
“Do you think we’re going to be dancing?” Alicia asked. Thoughts of dancing with Katrina suddenly appeared, their two bodies interlinked as they moved with loud club music, and she caught herself blushing.
“I wish I could say. I think I’m going to play it safe and do something with pants, though, I think I found a good fit.”
Looking back in the mirror, Alicia decided her outfit was far too conservative for the night. If nothing else, wouldn’t this be a great opportunity to look sexy for Katrina? Even though they weren’t sleeping together yet, there was no reason to not look her best for her girlfriend. She furrowed her eyebrows as she began to concentrate, and watched as the various leaves and plant life began to recede.
What had previously been a sleek cocktail dress began to shorten, revealing even more of her rich green skin. Instead of ending at her knees, the bottom of the dress rose inch by inch until it sat in the middle of her thighs. The sleeves vanished, and her shoulders now sat completely exposed, as the material shifted inward. It now appeared as if she’d taken a long piece of fabric, wrapped it around her neck, then crossed it diagonally in front of her body to cover her chest before wrapping around her waist and joining her skirt. Her stomach was now completely exposed, as were the bottoms of her breasts.
Why do I feel more naked even though I’m wearing more than usual?
“Alright, I think this’ll work. I’ll be honest, I have no idea how to dress this new body of mine, especially since—” Katrina walked out from behind the closet door and stopped talking as she started looking at Alicia’s outfit. Her eyes went wide, and Alicia felt them traveling over her exposed body.
It was hard to be distracted by Katrina’s gaze, however, when it was so easy to find herself distracted by the Vampire’s out. She was dressed rather tame, at least compared to Alicia, but the look fit her perfectly.
She wore long, black cigarette pants that Alicia had seen her in before, and a matching short-sleeved black blazer. The black of those two pieces helped highlight the center of Kat’s fit; a deep, vibrant red button-up shirt that sat underneath the jacket. Quite a few of the top buttons were undone, giving Alicia a generous look at her cleavage, which almost distracted her from the elegant choker that rested around Kat’s neck.
Alicia was completely powerless to stop herself from blushing, nor did she want to. Her girlfriend was breathtaking, and not only was Alicia currently appreciating the view, but the thought of being seen with her seemed equally as exciting.
It took several moments before Alicia realized that Kat was just as speechless as she was. The moment was incredibly charged, and every instinct in Alicia’s body told her to take initiative. A devious smirk grew on her face as she took a step closer, her hands playfully tracing the inside of Kat’s blazer. She pulled the Vampire into her, then reached up and began tracing her fingers across Kat’s neck. They leaned into each other, their lips passionately meeting.
Kat’s lips were incredibly soft, and Alicia couldn’t stop herself from escalating the kiss. The girls tilted their heads, their tongues finding each other briefly before Alicia found the strength to pull away.
“Kat, you’re absolutely stunning,” Alicia whispered.
“Me? Have you seen yourself?” Kat whispered back.
“I mean, I kinda have to in order to figure out what to grow. It isn’t too much, is it?” Alicia pushed the closet door closed, then pulled Kat in so they could look at themselves in the mirror. She then faced a very awkward reminder that Kat had no reflection, and it looked like Alicia’s hand was hovering around nothing, rather than the Vampire’s waist.
Kat didn’t seem to mind, and either didn’t notice, or didn’t remark on the fact that Alicia had wanted to see them both together. “You look incredible, and I can’t wait to show you off.”
Alicia laughed before playfully pushing Kat away. “Oh, stop it you! You’re the one with nineteen Charisma! I’ll be shocked if anyone can pull their eyes off you long enough to even notice I’m there.” As they both laughed, Alicia heard her phone go off. She pulled it out of her makeshift skirt pocket, then read the text from Tabitha.
Tabitha: You two ready yet? We don’t have all night.
Tabitha: I mean, we do, but you don’t
“Well, it looks like we’re being summoned,” Alicia said. Katrina held out her hand, and the two happily left the house to meet up with Tabitha.
The Foxgirl, interestingly enough, was rather underdressed in comparison. No doubt it was due to the lack of time; it had realistically only taken Alicia and Kat about fifteen minutes to get ready, hardly enough time for Tabitha to go home, change, and make it back in time.
Although, with her Agility, she could probably have managed.
Tab whistled loudly as the girls left the house. “Damn, look at you two. Really nailed the assignment, didn’t you?”
“You would know better than we would, Tab,” said Alicia. “You’re the one that’s not telling us where we’re going. Is it a club? Am I going to be dancing?”
With a sly grin, Tabitha winked at Alicia. “I would love to see that. I really hope you do.” She turned around, gesturing for the others to follow, and they all began to leave the neighborhood.
Alicia leaned close to Kat and whispered, “Why did that feel sinister to me?”
Kat shrugged. “Wish I could say. I don’t think I’ll ever be able to read that girl.”
As they kept walking, Alicia happily squeezed Kat’s hand tight. Although she was nervous about what Tab had planned for them, she was equally optimistic by the context. Whatever happened tonight, she seemed to think it would help solve Kat’s mana problems. Plus, even if all else failed, it was still an excuse to dress up and hit the town with each other.
It was a beautiful night. The moon wasn’t quite full, but the cloudless sky meant they had plenty of light to navigate with. Most of the lights in Alicia’s neighborhood had been deactivated, although power still ran through the lines. Thankfully, new legislature had prevented the power companies from shutting off the power in her neighborhood. Because her Heart Tree couldn’t be moved, she had been able to carve out quite a few exceptions through the myriad laws that passed after the Change.
A soft breeze danced across the barren street, kicking up a flurry of leaves, and Alicia pulled Kat closer to fend off the chill. After nearly an hour of walking, they had finally entered an inhabited neighborhood.
She began to see collections of houses and apartments, all with varying levels of light and activity, and many with obvious alterations made to support unusual Races. Various street corners were filled with stores and shops, and strangely enough, it almost felt like being in the city again. Obviously, they were still quite far away from the city limits, but Alicia noticed it mostly in the energy of the people around them.
For one thing, despite the time, small groups of people walked back and forth across the street, happily talking as they visited the different establishments. Alicia suddenly remembered that, of all the different legislation that had been passed after the Change, much of it had affected city planning and zoning.
Previous, draconian restrictions had been eased, if not completely eliminated. Residences and commercial properties were allowed to exist side by side, and often in the same building. Small, walkable neighborhoods that had previously been legislated out of existence had returned with a passion, something that Alicia had never been able to take advantage of. She mostly remembered her ORC training, the various lectures about how losing nearly half of the population had encouraged lawmakers to do everything possible to create and strengthen local communities.
Alicia nearly got lost in the novelty of it all, but she could also feel the weakening connection with her Heart Tree. She wasn’t as tired as she had expected, but she still leaned on Kat for support as they walked around.
“How are you doing, Kat?” Alicia asked, looking up at the Vampire.
“Not terrible. It’s still pretty open, and right now it’s easy to avoid people. I’ll let you know if I need any help, though.” The girls smiled at each other, then quickly kissed before returning their eyes to the street.
“Tab, where are we exactly? I haven’t seen a single car since we got here,” Alicia asked.
“Cars aren’t allowed in the neighborhood, except for niche cases like someone moving. They set up some big parking lots on the outside of the town, and everyone has to park there before coming in. There are quite a few neighborhoods like this, honestly, they became pretty common after the Change. People banding together, trying to condense all the different facets of society into one location to make surviving easier. Remember, in those early years when Chicago was overrun with monsters, people didn’t know if it would spill out into the suburbs at all. Places like this popped up partially because they could be easily defended.”
“That’s right, I almost forgot about that,” Katrina said. “The biggest one is set up around the guild hall, which used to be a huge mall. I used to hang out there and busk sometimes.”
“Yup! I’ve been there a bunch, done a couple shows even. Anyways, the place we’re headed to is right through here.” The three of them had just crossed another intersection, and Tabitha was now pointing at a strange metal arch that stretched over one of the streets. Strangely enough, the space underneath the arch was filled with a thick, shimmering fog that obscured their view. Alicia could see the various shapes of people on the other side, but couldn’t make out any details. The only other notable features were two large, red lights on either side of the arch.
“Alright you two, follow me!” Tabitha said, disappearing past the strange fog.
Alicia looked over at Kat, who squeezed her hand for support before stepping after Tabitha. Passing into the fog, Alicia realized it was simply an illusion, and they passed through it without issue.
Now on the other side, Alicia immediately realized where they were. They were still surrounded by countless stores and businesses, but on this street, they were free to advertise sex work to their hearts content. Initially, Alicia saw the exact types of establishments you’d expect; brothels, sex shops, things of that nature. What she hadn’t expected were the countless stores that didn’t seem related to sex work in the slightest.
Over the course of her first few minutes, Alicia saw a potion store, an enchantment boutique, a tattoo parlor, and a bookstore. Her curiosity finally got the better of her, and she spoke up. “Tab, it looks like we’re in a Red-Light District, but why do so many of these places seem like normal stores?”
“Shoot, have you never been somewhere like this before? Wow, you two have got to get out more often.” Tabitha slowed down and began to match Alicia’s pace as she continued. “Okay, so, the veil at the entrance is an age gate. It makes sure that you’re eighteen or older or it doesn’t let you in, but it also obscures vision both ways. Yes, sex work is legal, but it’s still nice for families to be able to walk to dinner without their kids accidentally peeking in a brothel window.”
“Ohh that makes sense. I guess I never thought about that,” Alicia said.
“Now, about the stores, you’re mostly right. Many places here aren’t explicitly in the business of sex work, but sometimes there are overlapping interests. That bookstore, for example, is run by a Succubus. She accepts money and coin, just like everyone else, but is also more than happy to accept a more physical form of payment. Rather than set up outside, where she’d have to be more discreet, she bought a storefront here so she could be open about everything. The enchantment place and the potion shop have similar situations.”
“What about the tattoo parlor, who owns that?” Kat asked.
“Just a Human, actually. Completely normal Class, no extra physical needs from her Race, but she’s got a crazy libido and a huge monster fetish.” Tabitha giggled as they walked past the parlor, and she even waved to the artist inside. “She’s great, you’d probably like each other. Though, maybe for different reasons.”
Alicia, as much as she was trying to pay attention to everything, was starting to grow distracted by the revealing outfits she saw everywhere. “This is really interesting, but, um, why are we here? You don’t expect us to, y’know…”
“Oh, I wouldn’t dream of it, Cherry Blossom!” Tabitha pulled Alicia closer, playfully hugging her tight. “I know you two aren’t there yet.”
“Wait, you do? How?” Kat asked, her face red.
“Please, I cam for a living. The way you two are looking at each other? You’re obviously incredibly turned on, but you’re also hesitant about being open about that. Don’t worry, we’re just here to watch.”
It only took another minute of walking before they arrived at their destination: The Scarlet Showcase. The outside of the building looked exactly like an old movie theatre, and had likely been one before the change. Large flashing lights welcomed them as they walked inside, and they quickly found themselves in a small, cozy lobby. At a small podium, a Human man with short black hair looked up and smiled at them.
“Miss Kithkin, what a pleasant surprise! Did you have a show tonight? I must admit, I don’t remember seeing you on the schedule…” the man said.
“No, I’m here as a guest tonight. Well, honestly, I’m mostly just buying some time for my friends here.” Tabitha moved closer, slipping a small piece of paper to the gentlemen. “And if you could pass this to Alouette, that would be great!”
“Of course, Miss Kithkin. And your friends are…?”
“Oh, right, where are my manners? Bruce, this is Alicia and Katrina. Girls, this is Bruce, and he’ll be guiding you to your room for the night. I’ll be setting up on the main floor, probably in the back so I don’t draw any attention, but you come find me when you’re all finished.”
Alicia nodded slowly, trying her best not to seem overwhelmed. “O-of course!”
With a polite hand gesture, Bruce began to lead Alicia and Kat through a small hallway. The walls were lined with elegant picture frames, all containing portraits of various performers and guests of honor. Alicia’s best guess was that they were burlesque performers, though she didn’t recognize any of them, and couldn’t muster the strength to ask their guide for more details.
Soon enough, they walked through a thick curtain and found themselves on the main floor Tabitha had mentioned earlier. Countless lights of different shapes and colors covered the ceiling, but the room itself was quite dim, as most of them were casting a soft red glow over the crowds.
The only exception was the various stages set up around the floor. Two smaller platforms sat near the sides of the establishment, each holding a large metal pole that stretched from floor to ceiling. The lights focused on these side stages were slightly brighter, and each stage held a beautiful, scantily clad woman in the middle of showing off both her body and athleticism. Alicia’s attention didn’t hold long enough to glean any details of these dancers, however, as she found herself drawn to the main event.
The center of the room was dominated by a large stage, complete with a short runway that connected it to the back wall. This main stage had no pole in sight, and was instead completely dedicated to a singular performer that took up an impressive amount of space.
The dancer appeared to be on the smaller side, both in height and bust, and had long black hair that seemed impossibly silky. She was suspended by an intricate series of white ropes and ribbons, each affixed to the ceiling at different points, though Alicia couldn’t see how they were attached. They wrapped around her lithe body, cradling her as she moved through a series of flips and spins many feet above the stage. The remarkable woman wasn’t nude, though her choice of performative lingerie certainly left little to the imagination, and Alicia was glad that the dim lighting would hide her blushing.
As she continued watching, she saw four large protrusions extending from the performer’s back. She first thought they might be wings, but after a few seconds, she saw them flex and extend in four different directions, their barbed tips playfully threatening to reach for members of the crowd.
After an impressive flip, another white ribbon appeared from the woman’s hand, affixing itself to the ceiling and allowing her to shift her performance away from the stage. She was now suspended over the crowd, continuously spawning more material to aid in her movement. Each maneuver was clean and perfect, designed to show off her beautiful body, while also highlighting the erratic movement of the four extra limbs on her back.
As the song neared its climax, the dancer suspended herself upside down, her chitinous legs reaching for various audience members and threatening to scoop them up. She opened her mouth, revealing an impossibly long tongue, before her jaw seemed to unhinge and open even wider. She hissed as she showed off a collection of razor-sharp teeth, and as the music swelled, she made eye contact with Alicia. The Dryad stared back, lost in the performer’s eyes, unable to make herself move. She looked back and forth from one eye to the other, when she realized there was more to see. An additional pair of eyes had just opened, these ones small and red, and they were also staring at Alicia. She then found a third pair, a fourth after that, and Alicia finally realized exactly what she was looking at.
A Jorugumo. A monstrously powerful spider-person with four extra limbs and eight eyes all perfectly trained to hunt. She was suspended in a web of her own making, her performance daring helpless patrons to wander closer and test their luck.
Alicia was simultaneously thrilled and terrified, and she was only able to break her gaze when the performer turned to examine another member of the crowd. Alicia released the breath caught in her throat before turning back to Kat. The Vampire seemed equally stunned, though it was hard to tell if that was from arousal, fear, or the urge to fight her own hunger.
“Kat, I’ve never been to a strip club before!” Alicia said.
“That makes two of us,” Kat said with a smile. “That Jorugumo is incredibly skilled, and I think she was looking right at you.”
Bruce spoke up next, his voice startling Alicia, who had completely forgotten about him. “That would be Aya, our guest of honor tonight. You’re lucky to have caught a bit of her performance, her ability to capture an audience’s attention is almost unmatched. She’s normally based out of a brothel in the city, though we managed to convince her to pay us a visit tonight. She is also, however, not the performer you’ll be spending the night with. If you’d follow me, I’ll show you to your room.”
Alicia nodded and blushed as they started walking again. She had gotten so caught up in Aya’s performance that she’d completely forgotten why they were here. She shuffled closer to Kat, holding her arm tight as she made sure the Vampire wasn’t overwhelmed by the crowd.
It only took a minute to arrive at their room. Bruce held the door for them, assured them that they would only be waiting for a minute or so, then closed the door to leave them alone.
Alicia heard Kat breathe a sigh of relief. “You holding up okay, Kat?”
Kat nodded. “I’ll be fine, though the main floor is definitely a challenge. Pretty much everyone out there is incredibly aroused, which means their blood is pumping that much harder. It’s a good thing we have a private room tonight.”
Content that Kat was okay, Alicia finally let herself explore the room. The lights were set up similarly to the main floor; soft and red, with slightly more focus on the pole in the middle of the room. The pole itself was thicker than the ones Alicia had seen on the main floor, and as her eyes traced it higher, she noticed their room had vaulted ceilings. She guessed there was at least fifteen feet of clearance, if not more, and wondered why this room needed such accommodations.
A soft red couch sat on the far wall, and Katrina had just taken a seat in the middle of it. The Vampire was twiddling her thumbs and tapping her feet, and while Alicia watched, she pulled out her purse to drink more of her blood ration. Alicia walked closer, took a seat, and draped her arm around Kat’s shoulders.
“Hey, um… you mentioned before that you’ve always been pretty introverted. I know the private room will help with your hunger, but how are you doing apart from that? You’re more than just your Race, remember.”
Kat smiled back, then leaned against Alicia with a deep sigh. “It’s pretty easy to forget that, I suppose. They often feel like the same problem, one that gets harder with crowds and easier with isolation. But, yeah, this is definitely a big step outside of my comfort zone. I’m sure Tab just wants to help, but sometimes I… I dunno.”
“What?” Alicia asked. “You can tell me, Kat, you know I’m on your side.”
“Well, it’s just, Tab is a sex worker, and that’s great! I’m really happy she’s proud of her work, and it makes sense that she would have connections with a bunch of other performers in the industry.” Kat took another sip of her ration before continuing. “But, sometimes I wonder if she’s purposely flaunting it to try and make us uncomfortable. Like, she knows we’re not sleeping together yet, but ever since she met us, she’s been pretty pushy about how attractive she finds us.”
Alicia paused for a moment, thinking about Kat’s words. It was hard to deny what she was saying, Tab was nothing if not a pushy suitor, but socialization was so new to Alicia that it was hard to make those judgments. “Do you want to talk to her about it? Ask her to dial it back?”
“I don’t think so, but it’s just something I want to keep an eye on. I’m super happy she’s helping us, and I also don’t want to jeopardize that.”
“For what it’s worth, as someone who’s spent just a tiny bit more time with her, I think she’s just got a big personality. I don’t think she would give up on us just because we turned down her advances.” Alicia nuzzled closer and kissed Kat’s cheek. “But, I’ll help you keep an eye on things moving forward, okay?
The two girls faced each other and quickly kissed again, but this time, the moment was interrupted by the opening of a door. The loud stage music from outside briefly poured in, followed by their company for the night.
Walking through the door was an incredibly tall woman with gorgeous brown hair that cascading over her broad shoulders. She had deep brown eyes, and a wide smile directed at the girls on the couch. Interestingly, she had to duck to walk through the door, and when she straightened out, Alicia realized just how tall she was.
The woman was massive, at least 9 feet tall, and she looked as if she’d just walked off stage from a bodybuilding competition. Every inch of her body was perfectly defined as if sculpted from marble, and she carried herself with confidence Alicia had never seen before. Each step radiated purpose; each movement appeared precision-designed to draw attention.
Her outfit, when compared to her physique, was deceptively simple. A red, two-piece bikini lined with sequins was strained to its limits around her muscular form. The top was clearly straining against her heavy breasts, and the bottom was fitted perfectly around the curves of her ass.
The dancer walked closer, a practiced smile on her face, and finally spoke. After leaning down quite a bit, she held out her hand to Alicia. The Dryad placed her own hand in the dancer’s, noting the incredible difference in size, and her face grew even hotter as the dancer lightly kissed the tops of her fingers. She repeated the maneuver with Katrina, who seemed equally flustered. “Tabitha mentioned that her guests might be flustered, but goodness! You’re even cuter than I anticipated! If I may be so bold, I’d wager a guess that neither of you are very familiar with clubs like this.”
Alicia and Kat both wordlessly shook their heads, then the dancer continued. “Well, worry not. Regardless of how comfortable you are with the art of seduction, my number one priority is your comfort and consent. If I’m getting too close, or showing too much, you say the word and I’ll dial it back.”
“That’s, um… very kind of you,” Kat said quietly. “Though, I’m afraid I didn’t catch your name.”
With a hearty laugh, the dancer responded. “Oh, how rude of me! You may call me Alouette, and I’ll be your entertainment for the evening. Tabitha indicated that I would just be dancing tonight, but if for any reason you two decide you’d like to take things further, all you have to do is ask.”
“Actually, do you think you could give us just a minute?” Kat asked.
“Of course I can, darling. I need to set up the music for tonight anyways, so you take all the time you need.” After another practiced smile, Alouette stood up and walked over to a small console by the door.
It took significantly more willpower than Alicia had expected to tear her eyes away from Alouette’s perfectly toned ass, but her worry about Kat’s request for pause was easily more important. She turned to her girlfriend and asked, “Kat? What is it?”
“Well, before this all gets started, I want to check in with you about what’s okay and what’s not. After everything you shared with me the other night, I don’t want to accidentally make this uncomfortable for you in any way, and this seems like the kind of situation that might cause problems.”
“Oh, I hadn’t even thought about that,” Alicia admitted. She thought back to their conversation the other night, and the emotions that had led there, before responding. “I think this is already pretty different. It was my first time seeing you interact with another girl, and get really excited about something, and I felt a little left out. Here, it’s like we’re both in this together. Correct me if I’m wrong, but it looks like we’re both a little overwhelmed by Alouette’s looks.”
Kat nodded quickly. “That’s certainly one way to put it.”
“As long as we stay together, and enjoy this night as a couple, I think I’m more than happy to, um…”
“Lose yourself in the show? Appreciate the view?” Kat asked.
Alicia caught herself blushing, unable to say it herself, but still nodded quickly in agreement. “Is that okay with you?” she asked.
“I promise you, I don’t have a jealous bone in my body. Alouette could give you an hour-long lap dance and it would do nothing but excite me. I want you to enjoy yourself tonight, Alicia. I’m still not entirely sure why Tab brought us here, but she hasn’t let us down yet.”
It took a moment for Alicia to respond, as her eyes had wandered back to Alouette’s skimpy outfit and she was envisioning herself getting a lap dance. “Right, yes. Good to know.”
Kat leaned closer and quickly kissed Alicia’s cheek. “You’re adorable when you’re flustered, by the way,” she whispered.
Alouette, somehow, seemed to sense that their private conversation was over. She began walking closer, covering the distance with only a few long strides, and she playfully traced her fingers over the pole as the music in the room began to swell. “Sounds like we’re ready to begin! Any requests before we start?”
Alicia shook her head quickly, and was once again losing the battle of trying to look Alouette in the eyes. The dancer giggled playfully, grabbed the pole, and started moving.
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Well, that's certainly a change of pace, isn't it? This chapter makes me feel a lot better about all the time we spent training, as it'll help break up the flow for people that might not be as excited about the dungeon delving part of this story.
I don't think I have many specific questions for this chapter. Honestly, I was going to try and squeeze all the events of this night into just Chapter 15, but then I hit 5k words and Alouette hadn't even started her dance yet.
Just keep an eye out for all the usual suspects; grammar, spelling, dialogue that feels out of character, etc.
Thanks a bunch, as always!
Nyx <3
Comments
Nyx Nyghtingale
Next chapter will be picking up at the start of Alouette's dance! I still haven't revealed why Tabitha brought the girls here, after all
Gerald Ferguson
Does this chapter lead to.next? Or will it be a use your imagination as we.pick up with the couple back at home?
Nyx Nyghtingale
I'm absolutely planning on incorporating the action soon! Since none of them have delved before, I wanted to show them preparing in this middle section of the book, and hopefully that makes it more believable when they start.
Gerald Ferguson
I wouldnt say shock.....at least for me.... Given who Tabitha is it actually fits especially when you account for the fact that she has been subtlely hitting on both Alicia and Katrina. As I see it she is "pushing" them forward so that maybe she can become more involved in maybe a sort of poly way. I will say however, I am disappointed in the lack of action given what the world is. They are.living in their own D&D world and I grew up playing the table top so seeing characters grow and evolve and become more powerful...
Nyx Nyghtingale
Blood & Chlorophyll chapters always run a little short in comparison to SaS. This one, and the last 4-5, have been just over 5k words, which I think is a good length for the vibes of the story.
Gerald Ferguson
Just me.or invredibly short chapter
Nyx Nyghtingale
Hopefully that's a good thing! Tabitha is absolutely a character that, while she loves talking, also speaks volumes through her actions. I imagine this chapter might be less of a shock for certain sites (Literotica, obviously) but it's a new dynamic I really wanted Tabitha to bring to the table. If nothing else, I guess I nailed the shock factor :P
AFanofRoses
Okay. I should have expected Tabitha to bring them to a place like this, but I guess the wholesome lesbian nature of the story so far lulled me into a false sense of chastity. I honestly don't know what to think or what commentary to offer. Jumping into a Red Light District seems out-of-nowhere in the story, but Tabitha was probably fishing for that reaction from Alicia and Katrina, so it fits into the narrative that way. And the two ladies seem appropriately overwhelmed and uncertain and hesitant, so their feelings match my own. I'm really at a loss. For perhaps the first time in this series, I can't think of anything to say.
