Patrefans
Nyx Nyghtingale from patreon
Nyx Nyghtingale patreon

Suddenly A Succubus Ch. 38

🕑 Added 2025-02-28 18:00:18 +0000 UTC

Comments

Nyx Nyghtingale

An interesting problem I've run into with the end of this book is that there's SO much I could choose to expand on if I wanted. At the end of the day, I try to keep the narrative focused as much as I can, and I also didn't want to lose the sense of urgency regarding Brandon's invasion. We'll be seeing more of the side characters in Book Four, though I'm not entirely sure to what extent at the moment.

Gerald Ferguson

Kind of on fence about this chapter. I already commented about the Chloe conversation but what I am struggling to decide whether it fits or not is the erotic part. On one hand it feels ruahed and glossed over almost as if the whole thing could of been a chapter on it's own and perhaps that is why because the chapter was already getting long. As I read it I keep looking for more dialogue, maybe humorous moments with Tessa feigning gagging moments as Amara has her fun. Also perhaps emotional struggles from Chris and Mark given the result of their last enounter amd how it affected them. Seemed like a good spot to expand Nyx's Succubus Lore here.

Nyx Nyghtingale

XD If I miraculously had the money to make merch, I honestly have no idea what I would do.

AFanofRoses

When can we expect merch of rune-enchanted knives?


More Creators