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The Queen - Part 11

🕑 Added 2017-08-14 00:01:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

TJ Westfall

More is better

TJ Westfall

The art work is awesome and more sex scenes would be great

abimboleb

I take that as a note!

Dude McDudeson

I feel you embellish somewhat with the length of an expected transformation. 4-5 pages does seem excessive for each body part which is why I enjoy abimboleb's style because the changes just general rush into the new gorgeous form. I feel the transformation is just as important as the payoff. Balance in all things.

Alice_28XO

Great great work here. I would appreciate more sex scene too but I really love transformation, especially slow mind corruption.

scopes777

then let me add more of my opinion to contrast those above...i prefer sex scenes...dislike drawn out 20 page transformations with minor changes on each page and finally once transformation is complete no "using" of the final product except for maybe 1 page...its like building a ferrari then leaving it in a warehouse not to be driven...in the end erotic content should be "erotic" something nsfw otherwise will be too PG and boring...so far i really like the pace of your transformations...even the VR set was a nice "shock" from 1 panel to the next...I liked that set alot...some artists show too many details in the transformations and slow changes happening to the point it starts to get boring and just ruins it..like 4-5 pages showing lips change...4-5 showing waist change...4-5 pages showing chest change...4-5 pages showing hair change...you get the point...too much unnecessary detail and then at the end nothing sexual :S I like the pace of your short stories so far...esp the newer ones (Shop/Queen/VR/PBHouse/Internship/and others) and hope you stick to that balance of transformation + sex.