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Holding Your Jealous Best Friend (Reverse Comfort) [Parts 1 and 2]

🕑 Added 2024-11-11 21:05:57 +0000 UTC

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Moon Berry Audio

That sounds like such a beautiful moment... It seems to have left quite an impression on you. Thank you for sharing that, it's so intimate... 🥹

Codewrds

Moist

James Jeans

This is going to be a novel, but... This reminds me of my first relationship. It was, oh, 25-ish years ago now. Yeah. I'm old. This was 1999 and we originally met online if you could believe it, but we became official after we met in person. It was winter time in Illinois. Our first real date happened at a lake. It was cold. Breezy. We shared our first kiss whilst huddled together in a long-dried river bed. After that, we went back to her family's house. In her room she sat at the head of the bed, legs crossed, and I lay on the bed with my head in her lap. The window next to the bed was open. We were on the second floor. The lake was near enough that a headwind pounded the side of the house and a strong, crisp breeze flowed in over us. I remember laying there as we chatted, and she ran her fingers gently through my hair -- yes, I had hair once upon a time, friends and neighbors -- and eventually I began to doze. My slow sleepy breathing, her fingers in my hair, the sound of the breeze coming in off the lake... that's one of the strongest memories of my youth. A lot of things have dulled in my mind over the years, but this never has. We were together for around 3 years. There was a lot of good and bad in that relationship. But this story really makes me nostalgic for those days; my head in her lap, her fingers in my hair, and that strong lake breeze flowing over and around us whilst I dozed. I've told this story so many times over the years... maybe even in the comments here before, ha. Embarrassing if so, but nevermind. Nostalgia knows no humiliation. Anyway. What I'm trying to say is: well done, Moon. Thank you.

Moon Berry Audio

Thank you so much! I really channeled the emotions that I felt during that time into that scene, and I'm glad that they translated well. I smiled so hard when I read this comment from my email :) Thank you!

Moon Berry Audio

The thought has crossed my mind... But I've always preferred recording my own scripts. Writing, recording, and editing are such significant parts of the creative process, and as time-consuming as they can be, I love having creative control over each part. This is also why I haven't, for example, hired an editor. I'm glad that you don't mind the slower releases, but I'll continue to try to upload more frequently while maintaining creative control over the entire process. And I've been trying to guess what the 'M' word is. I'm glad to have dodged it at least!

Moon Berry Audio

Thank you Tom! Thanks for supporting me and allowing me to create!

Moon Berry Audio

Thanks for listening, Aaron!

Viceroy

The intimacy of that scene in part 2 is just … just so … aaarrrggghhh!!! Beautifully written. Brilliantly performed. 10 stars

Codewrds

Also, have you considered taking on public scripts to supplement the ones you write? It might let you release a bit faster. Not that I mind the slower releases. The fact that I'm guaranteed a new story every time you come out with something is part of why you're my favorite. Edit: oh my gosh, this man is a genius. Double edit: nice dodge of the M word.