Closer: Page 04 (sketch)
🕑 Added 2018-03-02 12:38:42 +0000 UTCHi patrons, here's an update on the next page of the comic! This underwent slight deviations from the script, but to me it reads and flows a lot better. I'll be doing another two page at once workflow, so expect the next sketch page in a few days before I get this colored up.
Comments
KipFox
Panel 4 is just too cute with that expression.
Zaush
Far less hesitation, and the wording felt less organic. That said, it's normal for me to do on-the-fly adjustments to dialog while working on comic pages.
Harris_the_Foxx
What cute expressions! Love how you do it! Good work
Warwolf416
It is a nice one ain’t it
Warwolf416
I’m liking the yeen. And Jayden in the four panel, too cute
Warwolf416
Damn he big!
ArtMutt
This is looking fantastic. I really look forward to seeing more of this! I hope I get to catch a stream of you working on this. :3
WSAD
That's a cute fox!
Ar29
So thick ❤️