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Closer: Page 06 (sketch)
🕑 Added 2018-05-05 15:38:43 +0000 UTCHere's the sketch for page 6, and might I say this is probably the most annoying page yet! I went through 4 layout revisions, all with very boring profile angles and insertion closeups, and it just sucked. I think this came out well realized, comparatively.
It was mentioned that the lower left panel might need some pose revision to make it feel more dynamic and less stiff, so that frame could change between now and the final.
Today my friends are all throwing a goodbye get together on account of me moving out of state, so I'll have to come back to this on Sunday. I should be able to get a few hours of sleep before the festivities are set to start.
As always, comments on this are welcome!
Enjoy!
Comments
I live this heyna guy !
Asher Tail
Also aw man you're leaving Cali? maan I never got to hang out haha. Have fun and good luck!
Asher Tail
Huff! <3
Harris_the_Foxx
Love it! Have fun at your party!
Damie♥
The dopey tongue out thing Roger is doing in the bottom left is hot as hell.
CH1LL
This version is already amazing :p Love the dialogue and positioning
Well well wellllllll then
Warwolf416
Nice page
draegwolf
Safe trip man
I think the left bottom panel is great! I think the “stiff” look actually fits. If i would change anything I would say the upper right panel could be tweeked so that he is talking down at veiwer and we are not looking slightly down on him. It really isnt that big a deal and my idea may not even work. But this whole panel screams he is a dom, i feel always having the view below or at his level in this panel would really emphasize that. Either way looks great as always!
Junior
I like Zaush art work so much!!!
Sterling Rodd
Whew, that central panel is haauuwwwit...! :)
