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Interlude - Adam - Meathead - Lilly

🕑 Added 2021-06-09 16:49:30 +0000 UTC

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Allanther

Nope! Good catch!

Faiir

Also, first Tyrel is named as Tirel - is that intended?

Faiir

Can anyone remind me who Micheal is?

Allanther

Thanks for the reply! When you say you don't have the heart for, what do you mean?

Njordt

I think i know now why i dont like Lilly's pov: It's like watching a train that's about to tilt off its tracks, its going to end poorly for everybody involved. Cuz no matter the outcome, her complete lack of tact and understanding of her relationship with the Mc will lead to tragedy, cringe and possibly despair. As seen here, she projects an air of nobility and superiority when she is almost the antithesis, which has resulted her being alienated and alone when those two years in the academy were the prime opportunity to find friends and companions among the non-nobility. She is just the post-assistant to a mighty wizard with a title, in the two povs we have gotten there are so many hints that she is taking everything for granted to a perilous degree and greedy beyond words (as seen in her first pov in the tower). Her self-image as the adopted daughter of the mc is already straining the Sheildlings and her sharing of the letter will just cause more misunderstandings and heartache. So yeah, its like reading a pov about a Roman walking next to Pompeii and not seeing the signs of the eruption. Which quite frankly i dont have the heart for anymore.

John Pratt

I think Nemon forgot to teach Leslie how to be endlessly wealthy and now those two are starving

Heber

I see why Bi chose Meathead! Leslie and Mena need some talking though. The serious kind!

Bobtur

Thanks for the chapter.

PlasmaticPi

I wasn't sure if this was going to be that good or not as most interludes in books are just ok, but I was pleasantly surprised. Thanks for the great chapter!


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