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Wizard's Tower - Arc 2 - Chapter 37

🕑 Added 2021-07-19 20:24:25 +0000 UTC

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Hecktony

I really liked this chapter. I think it being a bit longer helped, the transitions between scenes felt less choppy than the previous few chapters. Also love that at this point he's blundered into commanding three or four different armies.

HumbleBee

She stopped mid-swing, he arms falling limply to her sides, and she turned to look at me with passionless eyes -> her arms

Allanther

Thanks! I think I fixed up, but my count was off.

Jason Hornbuckle

"Our relationship wasn’t a friendship, not like my friendship Ram’s was. There was certainly no romantic interest. It was more of a comfort that I could rely on her for certain things. I degree higher than what I would expect from any but my assistants. " There are like 4 typo's here

Allanther

It implied asking her to speak about Walker, think it needs more clarity?

Allanther

Fixed, thanks!

Allanther

Fixed, thanks!

Sky

Also, what is he asking her to tell him at the end if the chapter?

Sky

'The inn was called, '

HumbleBee

, so I slide my lunch over to them, an act that the quickly Count mimicked. -> that quickly the Count mimicked

Allanther

Fixed, thanks!

Faiir

Leslie is back at the tower grieving his loss < should be Lilly


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