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Wizard's Tower - Arc 2 - Chapter 44

🕑 Added 2021-08-05 16:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Dee

I cannot believe that pun did not occur to me before your comment. We’ll done. You are doing god’s work here. 😂

See typo 'dud': Or, in particular, his mother dud.

Jason Hornbuckle

"once Baron Aide recognized Count Wilchrest’s claim to title and governance. Or, in particular, his mother dud" Probably supposed to be "did"

Jason Hornbuckle

"The color did make me wonder if the color was the reason for the town’s name or the town’s name the reason for the color." This is kind of clunky. I would drop the first "color" in favor of some other pronoun, like "It made me wonder if the color was the reason" etc.

Faiir

So the LoyalTea Fargus had her drink makes her loyal to him rather than Sena?


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