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Wizard's Tower - Arc 2 - Chapter 45

🕑 Added 2021-08-09 16:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Enkelados

I swear Nemon is the best MC.

Allanther

Yes!

Noah

Great chapter :D

Jason Hornbuckle

"He paused, after he spoke, giving the magus in seated beside him a fearful glance that I almost didn’t catch. " the word "in" doesn't seem to belong here

Jason Hornbuckle

“One [Tempest] spell at the right time, and the soldiery takes up name. And you are?” I glanced at the man when he didn’t respond and found him staring in fascination at my staff. “You know it is considered rude to be jealous of another mage’s staff,” I declared with a harrumphed. It should be "harrumph" not "harraumphed". Also that earlier bit about the soldiery taking up name needs fixing somehow

Faiir

Anyone remembers when did Nemon gain the right to authority? Was it on tier-up?

Jason Hornbuckle

" In the center, the [Grand Magus] sat with a face that seemed molded to show permanent disdain, his braided beard was held firm with sting-thin golden chains." Prob should be "string thin"

Jason Hornbuckle

"With my newfound knowledge of Rights of Authority, I had expanded what I available ten-fold. I also had two more that I had yet to choose as well. " This is kind of garbled. Expanded what was available or maybe "available to me" for sure but what does "I also have two more" refer to? More Rights of Authority? Or more spells?

Jason Hornbuckle

"Behind Loralie, three human women swooned and a fourth feinted. Loralie, though, just blushed and looked at her feet. I waited a full six breaths before I turned and began walking again. With laughter in my voice, I called out behind me, “And she was a barmaid that the Scholar’s Delight.”" Probably should be "fainted" and "a barmaid at the Scholar's Delight"


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