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Wizard's Tower - Arc 3 - Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2021-11-01 20:28:57 +0000 UTC

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Deathburn

Could he combine earth magic with lightning to create magnetism?

Jason Hornbuckle

"Each one held one wore a bit of the cloth that had covered the board around their bodies like a robe. " I think "held one" should be deleted

Jason Hornbuckle

"I ignored the cracked door on the next floor down were my two assistants were busy in the same room. " were should be where

Jason Hornbuckle

"but when I had considered using similar magics to increase the inside of my tower, I found the complexities for those enchantments to hold complexities beyond what I imagined." Swap one complexity for a synonym and this will read smoother


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