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Wizard's Tower - Arc 3 - Chapter 50

🕑 Added 2021-12-28 02:05:53 +0000 UTC

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Allanther

We're approaching the end of arc / book 3. I feel like my pacing has been off for lots of this arc compared to others - this was an attempt to it down a little before the arc 3 climax.

"I butchery that cut up the ..." sb A butchery

Sky

Not to bitch, but could you make the chapters a bit longer? Or have fewer explanations? This whole chapter was about Nemon stepping through two doors. No meaningful dialogue, no plot progression, no magic. I feel like this chapter could be removed, or at least summed up in a couple of paragraphs.


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