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Chapter 40: Pointed Questions

🕑 Added 2021-05-21 16:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Scott Frederiksen

I liked it. 🤷‍♂️ It shows his character in a way that a telling would be insufficient for.

ZaA

Reading paragraphs and paragraphs of him thinking about how 4o kill them instead of it just saying that, "he spent a long time thinking and decided to..." is something I can see becoming very annoying. Not everything needs to be shown. Good ending to the chapter though

Saltymen

Oh damn.


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