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Chapter 85: Sermon of the Crimson Dragonewt. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2020-07-22 03:28:46 +0000 UTC

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Golden Fern

In paragraph 10 it says villager when it should say village

Diego Rossi

They truly showed that rice has been *apart* of their -> a part.

Truth

Now that I think about it, is reverence and/or subordination really the requirements for becoming a follower after all? I wonder whether they became followers of the village holy savior or whether they have ulterior motives. (They would big time in reducing monster attacks or illnesses during the season.) To be honest though, I wouldn't mind the group staying at the village for a while, since it is getting close to winter if I recall correctly. They could practice during the time. Plus, if lucky, the Lord might send a mage (and some guards) to help protect and make connections with the priestess during the winter, which would be a great chance to learn about magic and religious studies from humans. ...........In my heart, I am secretly waiting for Hestia to create the [Olympic Torch] though. It would be cool if she started the foundations of the Olympics in another world. In exchange for a display of athletics and martial technique (along with some possible magic-related competitions in the future), both Aurena and Daterno would bless the competitors and their lands, but they will look down on those with corrupted hearts and dishonorable behavior. I think it could become a big thing for the village that she is in now. It would attract a great deal of traffic and trade, and it could promote the development of agriculture and military. Daterno would definitely be grateful for it. Lol

Cadastral

So, the Misfits Hero party arrived in this kingdom a week ago? I can't wait until they and Hestia's party encounter one another. Also, I'm not sure if "hecticness" is actually a word, although I don't know for certain either way.

Imp

Saori the Demon Teacher rears her head a bit. "You think that's strict, oh young hime-sama? If you were my student... ha. ha. ha." I can just imagine it now. I can just imagine Saori instructing Tasianna and Kushlek’zar on how to be a demon teachers; I'm amused by this idea more than I should. Cute little jingle at the start, but it sounds really familiar, even though I can't place it. Is it original, or based on something existing? Uh oh! Its been a week, time for [Battle Frenzy] to start rearing its ugly head. I assume the saurians stuck around, because originally they were planning on running off to track down the slaves, but no longer need to, so no rush on their end. And I had to laugh at the woops. Broke everyone's ID. Just the way it was phrased made me gigge. The house... I guess they're planning on spending the winter here? My first read through, it kind of threw me, because I can't imagine Hestia or Saori wanting to not travel. And we're starting a garden with winter coming? Or is the garden indoors? I only read v3 of the chapter, but I just assumed that [Prayer] was a Sacred spell, and that's why Hestia could cast it. Is there a difference between Holy and Sacred custom spells? Ah, and there's the beastman prejudice. Good to see Tasianna wasn't all wrong. Not just at the prayer, but at the odd mention of "dirty her hands." Hestia has claws - they're torn on treating her like a human noble, or a lowly beastman. Maybe include a note at the bottom for people that don't remember what Venerated Saintess does? I had to go back and look it up, since its been a while. Prayer has four stages? I've only ever seen three stages so far - minor, medial, major. Humanize, the poisons, Stage Fever... is the 10% minor, and the 100% something beyond Major?

Good point, thanks for pointing that out.

Kevin Caffrey

It’s a little weird that she directly experienced a god giving her a custom spell (and messing with her other spells) but she is still skeptical about [Prayer] not being created by Aurena and instead created by the church. Her reasoning is that “duh it’s custom, if a god did it, it would be a system spell”. Yet only a week prior a god gave her a custom spell...?

Andy

Oh, I wonder what she is going to evolve into. I can't wait for the next chapter. xD

Hmm, good points. Guess i should rethink those points

Truth

Also, um, this chapter basically makes [Holy Flames] and [Corrosive Fire] completely unnecessary. What is the point of having rare sub-elements and getting rid of the previous system spells if you are just going to bring them back in less than five chapters? In fact, why is the [Prayer] spell gained only on the second try instead of the first time with Saori and Tasianna? This magic system was just slapped in the face in this chapter.

Truth

Noooooooooo!!!!!! Don't evolve yet. Someone, the gods, please stop her. She barely stopped at all; I want her to continue training without any evolutions........Her choice not to evolve is one of the few good choices I like concerning her personal development.


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