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Chapter 86: Daily Training and Lessons. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2020-07-25 21:18:51 +0000 UTC

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Truth

Replace [Lava Bullet] with ]Lava Bolt] as a name.....unless I am misunderstanding or underestimating something

Imp

And now.... its that time again! Evolution Analysis! The disappearance of the Noxious Blight dragon should surprise no one. It took a moment, but I'm guessing that her bout of Arcane Fever knocked Mana dragon off the potential evolutions. *Ahem* Lets begin with a look at our returning paths. Lava, Magma and Volcano once again rear their collective heads, though it seems that Magma is beter than Lava, and Volcano better than both. Kind of a neat evolution... if you live in a volcano. Might have some quirks that make you less likely to overheat from Symphony again, but overall, I can't imagine its a great choice for any of them. While I especially love the ruler-of-dragons bit, Idols want to travel, not live in a volcano. So, sadly, all three of these fail to really offer anything that is really relevant to Hestia's life. Young Arcane Corrupter Dragon and Young Black-Wrath Dragon are still no. Just... no. Arcane Corrupter for obvious reasons, I hope. Black-Wrath's description includes the phrase "short temper;" very high chance of making Battle Frenzy worse. Even if Hestia makes up with Kargryxmor, Hestia having temper issues is just not a good way to go. Young Thunder... thunder... thunder Dragon, Ho! Hear the roar, thunder dragon is loose! All in all, a solid option, including immediate access to flight! A very solid contender, though I question if it offers anything that the Skill Shop can't reproduce. Hellblade and Dreadflame reappear, but have sadly lost a lot of their appeal - while Hestia might still get something out of the evolutions, it feels like she's already got the best of each. Last of the returning chapions, Young Angel Dragon. Immune to holy damage, and buffs to Support options. Could synergize very well with Venerated Saint, could end up being repetative. The appearance of the custom magic Prayer and others suddenly make this much more attractive than previously, pulling ahead of the other returees. And now, for the new challengers. One new godly dragon, one rebel dragon, and two new ones that... well, the description hints that they're related to the gods, but it feels more like they're based on White Flames and Corrosive Fire. Right off the bat, Infernal Demon loses its appeal with the lack of access to fire magic; Hestia is having to branch out more. The "scales of pure heat" make me a bit worried as well - will all hugs burn? Also, who knows if it might undo the usurption of the blessing and give Danterno control? Might change in the future, depending on how well Hestia masters the new flames, but right now I can't recommend such an uncertain path. Ragnarok seems to be a fan favorite so far. The name's evocative, we've got Fenrir as a friend, and Tasianna could learn necromancy and then we could call ourselves the Children of Loki. Just the imagry is cool, it actually fits fairly well Hestia's hesitance towards the gods of the world. And the fire part doesn't hurt either from a able-to-defend-against-gods angle. Hestia could pull a Lucifer with this. The only drawback I can see, though, is again, pissing off the gods who seem pretty cool so far. Obsidian Blaze. Once again touching on the Battle Frenzy issue, a bit of Volcano-dragon feel, and making claws super sharp. Not sure how the obsidian will interact with our spark abilities. Despite feeling like its connected to corrosive fire, I can't really feel like its worth the risk. Especially if the obsidian is linked to our rather limited supply of flames. Ah, Starfang. I personally love that name. Of all the evolution options, its also the only one that offers some kind of social effect (flaunt imposing presence), the "calm dragon" line makes me think it coud potentially help alieviate Battle Frenzy. Blazing like a sun, powerful bodies and searing flames. Needs lots of food, but what else is new, Ms. Gluttony Dragon. Joking aside, this could make development of white flames and corrosive fire trickier. In the end, I'm currently torn between Angel, Ragnarok, and Starfang. Angel would allow Hestia to supercharge her Retainers and 'Fans'. Starfang probaby synergizes the most with her current skills, including her Idol charisma, her flames, and maybe lessen Battle Frenzy. Seems to have lots of potential in lots of areas. And Ragnarok... seems like it has the most potential for raw power. Of the three, I have to give Starfang my vote.

Imp

Thanks for the chapter! It was pretty fun. The duel between Kushlek'zar and Hestia was pretty neat, showcasing a bit of a new direction that Hime-sama is leaning towards. Though, despite using her elemental weakness, Hestia still needs to suffer two additional handicaps compared to the Torrent mage - lack of parallel minds, and lack of dragon form stats - in order to match just the lack of a single peice of equipment. The bird references throughout the chapter made me laugh a bit. Was quite curious until the end there. And I feel like Hestia's calming inviting the spies to tea while they're all tied up and being glowered at by Saori in her assassin-business suit. Cute. Small nitpick - Hestia mentioned that she can't cure poison without Cure, but Prayer does include removing Status Abnormalities as part of its functions. Given that she can fuel the spell on her own, she should be able to use BotGoL (Minor) to heal Minor poisons. And given that she still has some levels of Sacred Magic to go, she could theoretically get a System spell that can purify Major level ailments too. Finally some look at the new abilities. Curious to make them an innate ability that way. Also, lack of red threads is sad. May want to clarify how custom spells work in story. Danterno really screwed her over, forcing her to rethink her entire build almost ground up now. With the exception of the aura and claws, its a direct degrade of everything since her build doesn't work with the current form. No one is going to be happy with Hestia torturing herself, so Saori will have to do something different for her poison supply. The ‘birds’, huh? Yeah, damn pest, >> you went from plural to singular. Probably should be pests. dispelled my [Aire Shield] >> no 'e' ? weak monster like these could only be spawned >> do you mean "only weak monstes like these could spawn"

Truth

Oh yeah, wouldn't it be smarter to just rewrite the debuff affliction? You could just put the range of 15-60% or something instead of specific numbers for minor, right? In fact, I don't even the reason why the "Sapphire" part needs to be in debilitation status effect..... unless you are trying to say that Hestia was Cursed and Debilitated at the same time (but in a more roundabout way). On another note, am I the only who realized that Hestia could use her Dust as a magic reagent for her [Corrosive Fire] magic? Just imagine it: Her dust would set off multiple chemical explosions that leaves everything with stacks of different status afflictions. Lol

Truth

Thanks for the chapter!!!! Also, thank the Heavens that Hestia didn't evolve yet. Lol. I am super interested in the Young Ragnarok Dragon choice, but she might still have a lot more choices and possibilities by holding off from evolving still. As for my concerns, I I know that this seems ridiculous to ask, but..... why does [Venerated Saintess] only work for holy spells? Is Aurena the only one who has any Saintess among her religion? Based on the fact that Hestia is usurping and breaking her connection to the gods, I honestly think this skill should absorb all other elemental efficiency and amp skills so that it can boost all her elemental spells. In this way, she can decrease some skills, and her new skill will start subtly changing unexpectedly. It would change names or evolve yet, but it would already start developing in an unique path..... Although, admittedly, I already forgot what the main purpose of the skill was for, so there might be a need to remind readers (if there isn't already a reminder in the part chapter). ....cough cough....Changing the subject, I am shocked that her [Foresight] actually unlocks more functions from the Divine System. To be honest, I would have suggested that AbyssRaven-sama should enhance her sensitivity towards surroundings and movements. You could even enhanced reaction speed and dynamic vision as hidden effects. Well, I admit that I am biased, since this detail makes me worried about the alternative evolution of [Prediction] into the [Prediction Line] skill, a skill favored by archers. This skill would normally enhance visualization capabilities of the projectile paths, but I have read some characters who used it to "see" and react to attacks in high speed melee combat....... I just hope that this evolution path won't be forgotten or undervalued in the future (if possible).

Efgbog

Feels like that might be a smack in the gods face though, assuming ragnarok has the same meaning in their world. Looking forward to the next chapter, and what choice she makes (and the gods reactions).

Ragnarok!

Efgbog

Man all three of those evolution options sound great (not including burnys evo).


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