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Chapter 124: Momentary Respite. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2020-12-11 03:43:07 +0000 UTC

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Diego Rossi

Yes, it is what I thought, and it was clear in the context. By the general grammatical rules the word should exist, but it is underscored as an error and a a research in Internet find "Unexpectantly (proscribed) Some authorities or commentators recommend or warn against the listed usage." I am happy to support you as I like your work. It has he right tone to balance some other web novel I am reading. Keep it up!

Happy New Year, thank you for your support in 2020. Hmm, i guess i did use that word wrong. I wanted to convey that the village chief and captain didn’t expect what Hestia said.

Diego Rossi

Good 2021. Thanks for the chapter. "Unexpectantly, the guard captain and village chief looked pale as they listened to how large the horde of enemies was as we ventured down into the ruins. " To me it doesn't sound surprising that they will pale in fright. Maybe you meant to use a different term, as, AFAIK, "Unexpectantly" isn't used in English. Maybe something like: "Unprepared, the guard captain and village chief paled as they listened to how large was the horde of enemies that we found as we ventured down into the ruins. "

Efgbog

Thanks for the chapter!!


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