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Chapter 140: Firwood Concert. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2021-02-07 01:40:45 +0000 UTC

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Thank you very much! Also, concerning British or American English, I really don't know about that part since I learned British English in school but American English through the internet. My head is weird at that point.

bob barker

suggested alterations: who will compromise > which would compromise / who would otherwise comprise fitted > fit (unless using British English) peaked > peeked (unless intending to communicate a peak level of emotion, in which i'd suggest altering the sentence to clarify what about Saori had peaked) knight’s order > Knights' Order / knights' Order (etc, depending on the author's intended message) I’ve had time > I'd had time / I had time BNishop > Bishop Whole a major > While a major theconfidence > you know intensive > intensely

Oh you know exactly what it will be

ShimizuA

I want to know what will the heroes reaction be when they jeard Renai Circulation.

Alphafenrir401

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