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Chapter 183: Dungeon Break. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2021-05-28 23:37:49 +0000 UTC

Comments

Diego Rossi

Good. Thanks for the chapter.

I took on Termac's changes. How does the flow feel now? Clearer when the perspectives changes?

Termac

Yeah, I got caught up by the same thing. I thought it was Naden's party that suffered death by dragon butt for a bit. I've suggested a change that would clarify it. It just takes a change to a single sentence to clarify that it's the spiders that got crushed, and not the adventurers.

bob barker

the most confusing part was just before it switched to the mini spider's perspective, which was just before hestia came and smashed it. I forget whose perspective it was before that, but the transition between the before person and the mini spider was the most confusing for me

Skyell

It was fun to see their ascent from another perspective :3 thank you for the chapter.

Where exactly did it get confusing?

bob barker

I could have used a few lines to indicate when the perspective changed

Silverlight

Thanks for the chapter!

Termac

[Thunder Thighs Lv. 4]

Large enough to crush you. ;)

Frostbutt

You sayin’ Hestia has a big butt?


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