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Chapter 241: Ellaine Fiero Helvas. [First Draft]

🕑 Added 2021-11-01 22:52:38 +0000 UTC

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Diego Rossi

Hmm, wait a moment: - 2 person died at the same time (Helaine and Klea’Hatma!); - 1 amulet thar raise the dead; - Helaine is the weakest member of Aurora by a wide margin. Someone is getting a merge?

Trust me.

Kale Daley

Ugh, I really don't know how I feel about this arc. From how quickly things are escalating I truly don't understand how Hestia is supposed to make any meaningful difference in a conflict with such powerful foes. They also seem to be smart, achieving an assault on a kingdom's capital with very minimal forces while playing politics in the background to remove most of it's most able defenders. I'm sure this would have been worse if Aurora hadn't stymied the Grimgarian assualt and Davison's shenanigans. This all comes together to make it seem silly that an organization powerful enough to enact the downfall of a kingdom from the shadows would have even the slightest problem taking care of a couple of relatively green B ranks. Only time will tell I suppose. I'll trust you know where this is heading, as you haven't steered us wrong so far dear author. Can't wait to see the Hestia and Saori's fights. Also Tassiana showing some good old fashioned fey wrath. Looking forward to the next few chapters eagerly.

Jordan Parodi-Light

Never said you didn't like her, just that she was "only" human

Diego Rossi

Her auto-resurrection amulet will get her back. After all, it is a Chekhov's gun. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chekhov%27s_gun Why give it to her if she will never use it? Helaine problem is that she is the weaker member of the party.

Diego Rossi

I saw my decision to rebel against mother and to choose to become and Aurora. -> I saw my decision to rebel against mother and to choose to become A MEMBRE OF Aurora.

Aclys

I dont read it as hate for the character at all, more that she has a real tendency to get hit from behind by stuff she's really not ready to handle. That said, Owwie. And I guess we will soon find out whether Louis the pretender of pride (or is it envy?) Can stand up to a demonkin(or demon?) of Lust (at least I'm not seeing many other ways for Elaine to come back from this one). Also: Great chapter!

Noooo, I love her! I'm just being really harsh on her, uhm, tough love, I guess?

Jordan Parodi-Light

I think it's less a hate, but more a dislike for her being just a human on the team

Morg535

Author you really seem to hate Ellaine


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