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Chapter 267: Mage Tutor, Melloxtressa. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2022-01-11 00:55:37 +0000 UTC

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Oof, stupid mistake from me. Thanks.

Will C

I hope Elaine hoes for Holy as she would be perfect paladin material. Plus a demon paladin just continues her edgy demon Knight motif.

Diego Rossi

With the garms moving the RV and we only needed one person manning the coach, -> either: With the garms moving the RV we only needed one person manning the coach, (removing "and") or The garms are moving the RV and we only need one person manning the coach

Diego Rossi

“My smile was stuck in her head,” she told me. - When citing someone, usually you use her words, so it would be: “Your smile was stuck in my head,” she told me. Or it wouldn't have the quotation marks, and become: She told me that my smile was stuck in her head.


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