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Chapter 273: What is a “Zuekluk?” [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2022-01-26 03:07:59 +0000 UTC

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Maybe, but it doesn’t seem like Crustacia is that concerned really

KazukiNero

Wonder if they can challenge the ban on guns by proving Bleidla over step his bounds by banning an item that can't be made using only blacksmithing since Bleidla is only the god of blacksmithing and not craftmanship.

Maybe that whole paragraph just needs a total rewrite. Haruka is part of the Misfits, but she wasn't there at that point. Probably need a —.

Diego Rossi

"Tazlok to the left and Inkong to the left." Two left, no right.

Diego Rossi

"Fun fact, it wasn’t, and we should reopen old wounds.” - shouldn't And those are the moments that make me like Asaka. Sometime opening old psychological wounds to heal them properly can be useful, but it is never easy.

Diego Rossi

"While Mother looked at me cheerfully as if I was a cute cat, the latter half were waiting for me to begin." Mother cont as half of the people in the room, how true. :D

Diego Rossi

Thanks for the chapter: "Aside from our maids Svena and Josine, and Rajah and Shoyi, the other people in the communal room were the members of the Misfits, minus Haruka, Mother, and lastly, Grimnir." - while using "minus" to point out that "Haruka, Mother, and lastly, Grimnir" aren't part of the Misfits isn't wrong, it is more common to say: "Aside from our maids Svena and Josine, and Rajah and Shoyi, the other people in the communal room were the members of the Misfits, PLUS Haruka, Mother, and lastly, Grimnir." as it follow "the other people in the communal room were ..."

She had to and she did.

Frostbutt

She had to raise that flag didn’t she.


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