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Chapter 320: Royale Rumble End! [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2022-05-26 01:51:21 +0000 UTC

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Oh my

Diego Rossi

"It seemed I was not in the crossfire of the gambling scene of the tournament. " Wouldn't work better: "It seemed I was OUT OF the crossfire of the gambling scene of the tournament. "? "not in the crossfire" generally would mean she is considered, but instead she is pestered by happy or angry gamblers. giving her a small explanation of what happened, shocking her and the three Nordors of what happened. - the second " of what happened" seem redundant. From the trivial the announcer explained, - trivia Obviously, since Larent was in the match, he was the one the announcer did his best to hype up, prompting a portion of the seats to turn into a gambling ring. - AFAIK, Alistar is the one in this bracket of the Royal Rumble. , he streak ended when a group of contestants ganged up on him. -> HIS streak

Clayton Marshall

@KazukiNero Yorshka was trans all along.

Did I mess it up with Yorshka? I guess mistyped them. The more fun part is correct. I used it wrong there.

KazukiNero

First off thanks for the chapter. Now for errors I found I saw many instances where you used he when referring to Yorshka, another is where you used funnier when more fun should be used to described that part since funnier is referring to something that is funny.


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