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Chapter 356: Outnumbered. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2022-09-25 02:04:36 +0000 UTC

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naked eye!

Diego Rossi

Nice set of changes. Alistar had managed to save the majority of the fighters by calling an immediate retreat, but things were perfect, as I had been notified of their deaths. -> wereN'T perfect but we time is not on our side.-> but time is not on our side. unable to be found with the blind eye. - ? What is the "blind eye"?

Thanks! Hope you liked them!

BobpleTheGreat

I caught up!... Thanks for the chapters, hope you're enjoying your vacation.

Hmm, okay, thanks.

Diego Rossi

She then three the crystal back at us. -> She then threw the crystal back at us. our attention was drawn towards a group of fleeing soldiers and adventurers. After dispatching them, I had them bring us up to date. -> Maybe "After dispatching their pursuers," will sound better. "dispatching them" seems to refer to "a group of fleeing soldiers and adventurers." Alternatively: "After intercepting them, I had them bring us up to date."

brunoid

Thanks for the chapter.


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