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Side Story 47: The Fickleness of Fate. [First Draft]

🕑 Added 2023-01-29 03:45:30 +0000 UTC

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I'll make it clearer

Diego Rossi

- citation - A hunter one day, a prey on the next. However, the life of adventurers weren’t just filled with trust-issues and problems like what Vifi’Yok experienced. Friendship could bloom inside. Bonds made fighting with each other could turn unbreakable, as who could you trust better than those protecting your backs during a life-or-death situation. “Everybody!” A blond-haired young man raised his sword, causing it to gleam bright blue. “We have one week until the Event Quest begins! - end citation - The passage from Vifi’Yok POW to the Outwordlers party POW initially has left me perplexed. Only reading on I realized that you were speaking of two different parties. Probably on RoyalRoad a simple change of type for the interlude, or making it indented will make it clearer. Sadly Patreon lack those features.

Maybe I should have skipped this chapter to torment you! Muhahaha! Eh, jokes aside, it was needed to build things up.

Diego Rossi

Thanks for the chapter. It was a short but anxious wait. ;-) Now, to the suggested edits: In the past, some Systems had to be completely altered due to the evolving technology of the world, in most, due to the creation of manatech which use or influence dungeon core fragments. - mostly due to the creation of manatech an entire System to simply be changed from the god up - ground up have been using for over many years - have been using over so many years She had to find the local adventurer guilds and hope it was too filled with people. - wasn't to filled W\e’re making money - We


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