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Chapter 421: The Summit In Disarray. [Release Version]

🕑 Added 2023-05-22 05:31:16 +0000 UTC

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Oh, he's about to bite more than just dust. A knuckle sandwich from an angry kirin

brunoid

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to see Galg bite the dust.

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Diego Rossi

having lost what force keeping it in the air. -> having lost what force WAS keeping it in the air. - or - THE what force keeping it in the air. More quickly became his victims - it is technically correct, but when I read it I don't get the impression that - "more people" quickly became his victim - but instead that - "Something is happening more quickly," - so the phrase flow wrong for me. No idea what is the best way to change it, or if it is problem only I have. "The “perfect dwarf” the elemental turned Broggart into was a being of mana trapped inside a vessel of flesh and blood." - The “perfect dwarf” the elemental turned into Broggart was a being of mana trapped inside a vessel of flesh and blood. to smack the drake’s head him, -to smack the drake’s head, Already being responsible for a few lives was already nerve-wracking. - an "already" too many.


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