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🕑 Added 2022-07-15 15:01:05 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- I have no idea what are good gifts from Switzerland lol. - Lol, Erind is not Ichigo from bleach who's connected to all races. Erind's mom will probably be happy that Erind has a close friend because based on Erind's own narrations, she actually doesn't have a best friend before. - Deen was already fine with finishing off the frat guy she tied up so Erind might feel comfortable to make fun of that. I'm sure Deen has a negative reaction to it though. - Vegas does have plenty of augs people. - New character yep. I don't think we'll have Hedley kow's gang in this arc though, maybe the next one. Thanks for the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Sus for sure. But new character!

OmniHumanist

Typos: If our suspicion was correct that Dad was taken by the Corebrings to work for them, then it'd be insane if he found his daughter to be the enemy of humanity. -> If my suspicion was correct that Dad was taken by the Corebrings to work for them, then it'd be insane if he found out his daughter to be the enemy of humanity. But then relented because I was supposed to be nice to my first ally. -> But then I relented because I was supposed to be nice to my first ally. All the sits were occupied and there was a long line to the cashier. -> All the seats were occupied, and there was a long line to the cashier. It wouldn't worse if she saw me and still bumped into me, I sarcastically wanted to tell her -> It would be worse if she saw me and still bumped into me, I sarcastically wanted to tell her. ---- I've brought you two gifts from Switzerland and also some things I bought here at the airport -> It'd be interesting to see what Erind's mom brings 0-0. And to answer your question, yes, I'm worried about Mom knowing that I'm an Adumbrae. I think any daughter wouldn't want their mother to know that they became a monster. -> What if Erind's mom was also a monster lol? It'd also be interesting to see what Erind's mom thinks about Erind and Deen's relationship. I couldn't tell if Deen was pretending to find it funny because I was also pretending to find it funny or if she genuinely thought it was. -> This is still pretty ballsy for Erind to bring it up. What if Deen had a negative reaction about it? On the other hand, perhaps laughing is a coping mechanism. It must've been my imagination that he moved it. Could also be that some of them were just not that heavy. -> He could either have Augs or be an Adumbrae too. You must be careful about that in Vegas, though? With so many people having Augs, it makes it significantly harder for Adumbrae to attack people randomly. "My name is Imani, by the way," she said. "I don't think I've introduced myself. Come, the other store is just a block away." -> New character? What if we run into Hedley Kow's crew in the other shop lol?

Glowy3

she seems kinda sus not gonna lie.


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