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🕑 Added 2022-05-01 21:56:10 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Sometimes Erind reminisces about her high school days and she did some very petty manipulations back then. She sort of mellowed out as she grew older, also influenced by her interpretation of Rule 4 becoming stricter. But she does like drama, specifically the drama from manipulation. That side of her is coming back up again with the situation getting more complicated. It is a side thing though, sort of in addition to striving to survive. Yep, it isn't normal regeneration. And yes, there are alternate universes. Like the romcom Erind/Deen universe, Lol. For Vanessa though, that's only a partial explanation. What I can say for now is that we're not sure where Vanessa's brain is. Perhaps she has multiple, spread on all familiars. She had buried her mouth familiars in the tunnels, but we know how strong those guys are compared to the eye familiars. Thanks for bringing that up about Deen's plan. I'll add a couple later because it does seem lacking now that I reread it. Essentially, they're going to sell out Dario and also reveal to the 2Ms just how big an organization they're up against. Dario's org isn't all powerful as the can't get full intel, and the 2Ms org is also bigger than Deen knows (Erind knows there are groups like in Vegas), so they'll take advantage of the chaos to destroy them both. I appreciate the help pointing it out. This is really a shortcoming of having advanced chapters, thankfully, you're here to help out with stuff like this.

Skepto

This chapter raised a lot of questions. I had thought that Erind used manipulation as a means to an end, but it's interesting to see that she actually enjoys doing so. The thing about Myra's hair regenerating blue makes me think that what's happening isn't regeneration at all, but rather reverting to a previous/alternate save state. Considering that we know that alternate realities exist in this universe, we can apply the multiverse theory here and assume that their are infinite other universes. What could be happening is that whenever they are damaged, they have the body of a universe where they were not damaged slowly replace/switch with their body. I feel like that would have been the only way Vanessa could have lived as well. It was bothering me a bit how someone who was literally shot through the head and then set on fire could have possibly lived, but that theory would explain it. Especially considering that she was in an enclosed space with a fire, meaning that even if the smoke inhalation didn't kill her, the lack of oxygen would have caused brain death. Would it be possible to add like 2 paragraphs to the chapter where Deen further explains her plan? I feel like I'm not understanding Deen's plan very well at all. I get that she wants to pit the 2Ms and Dario's group against each other, but I'm not sure what purpose that would serve. They have no idea how big Dario's group is, but it would be reasonable to assume that they are probably a government organization that is separate from the BID and is focused on R&D. A government organization would be the only way they could have both the access and ability to monitor and change traffic camera footage to such a wide extent without raising any red flags, while also creating something like the artificial cores and suppressors. Maybe I'm misunderstanding the size of the 2Ms organization, but I highly doubt they could directly take on a government organization. It would be much more likely for them to attempt to work with a government organization (which the readers know they have already done with the police chief), than to fight against it. But even if somehow they did get them to fight each other, the only thing I could see that doing would be creating a decent smokescreen for Erind to disappear in, which definitely doesn't feel worth the risk.


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