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Erind/Deen - 5.7.1

🕑 Added 2022-06-15 13:00:29 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help!

OmniHumanist

More Typos: "What was it going to be? -> "What was it going to be?" "If you did that, then yeah, I might've floored the pedal in surprise You're such a bully." -> "If you did that, then yeah, I might've floored the pedal in surprise. You're such a bully."

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! - This really shows this can't be cannon because Erind is asserting dominance in a different way. - It's probably going to be funny, although I haven't thought of the next chapter yet. XD

OmniHumanist

Typos: It took the police officer about five minutes to ask us some questions and checked our documents -> It took the police officer about five minutes to ask us some questions and check our documents. --- I was irritated that she was taking charge of my life, and it may be time to assert my dominance. -> We need Erind to T-Pose in front of Deen now. After he left, Deen mumbled, "Erind...Can I also touch your leg?" -> It'll be interesting to see how Erind reacts to being touched more intimately. Thanks for the chapter!


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