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🕑 Added 2022-06-19 22:18:33 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Erind was trying to do that assassin thing where they'd twist their target's neck, there'll be a crack, and he'd instantly die. I'm not sure if that actually works in real life like it is on TV, but snapping necks could lead to death so Erind will probably figure it out someday, lol.

Skepto

Erind doesn't know this, but cutting someone's head off is actually not a quick way to die. A person remains conscious for 20-30 seconds with their head cut off. During the French Revolution, when the French were going around guillotining everybody, their were scientists that would go up to the convicted individuals and ask them to answer a set of questions (once their heads were cut off) by blinking for the answers, which is how we came to know such information in an arguably humane way.

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! The dashes are because I'm writing on a program that doesn't automatically convert dashes to em dash, lol. - Erind is quick to forget about her lie about being together with Deen. It's going to be funny for Deen to bring it up again. - Erind can eat it on her own, but she's not going to do that. SpookyErind doesn't want normal brains anyway. She wants mutant, Adumbrae, those sort of stuff brains. - Erind was going for the unstoppable monster trope hahaha. - I've been thinking about making TV Tropes for REND actually but don't know how.

OmniHumanist

Typos: The Eloyce University first-year student who dared touch me had the surprise of his life when I ripped his hand off -> The Eloyce University first-year student who dared to touch me had the surprise of his life when I ripped his hand off He had suffered enough, and there was nothing for my Blanchette evil Adumbrae face to terrorize here. What was the most efficient way to do it? Break his neck? -> He had suffered enough, and there was nothing for my evil Blanchette Adumbrae face to terrorize here. What was the most efficient way to do it? Break his neck? The problem was such a fire could be seen from the road. -> The problem was that such a fire could be seen from the road. —it hang on by a few strings of muscle and a stretch of skin-- -> The dashes got messed up here. --- My enthusiasm for the drama that’d ensue deflated a bit when the bastards basically trash-talked me saying I was a twig and couldn't get a guy. -> To be fair, Erind is more focused on getting a girl. If they remember in the Diner, Erind said she was Deen's girlfriend. I didn't want to dirty my own hands, and I certainly wouldn't try to eat them with my own body. -> RIP No brains for SpookyErind. Actually, does brains eaten by Erind's normal body count as fuel for the other faces, or does SpookyErind only want Blanchette to eat for fuel? Stepping out of the way was something a horror movie monster shouldn't do. -> It would really depend on the monster. If it was a quick monster then I'd expect it to just jump around everywhere as the protagonists try to pointlessly kill it. If it was slower, then I'd expect it to just shrug off the rock like it was nothing. With all these talks of horror movie tropes, maybe Erind should work for the equivalent of TV Tropes in Rend. Thanks for the chapter!


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