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5.17 - Enrico Haynes/ Yves Garland

🕑 Added 2022-06-27 01:49:54 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Yep, Deen's power is more for survivability. If the angel knows there's an incoming foe in several minutes that Deen will have no chance of beating, it will instruct her to run. Which is a problem because Deen sometimes doesn't listen to it, and so the angel also has to tailor it's advice into something that Deen will follow.

Aclys

Deen is unquestionably the greater threat to foes she can kill with her degree of superhuman attributes and/or available tools. That future sight is almost impossible to counter unless you are simply too powerful, too fast or too skilled for her angel to make a difference. But Erind has her beat in raw power and diversity of said powers. Most of the monsters Erind has killed as Blanchette, Deen could not have beaten but human foes actually, probably, have a better chance at escaping the big bad wolf, Deen had to take down no less than 3 out of the 8. If, on the other hand, Deen had been the bait in the station I sincerely doubt she and her angel would have let even one of the six escape outdoors.

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! - Frats are usually not worth the effort. I find that they're more helpful to those whose family has been in the frat for at least a generation before already. Can farm the benefits. - I think they're shouting "Die!" before shooting because of the ingrained hatred against Adumbrae. It's more a second nature thing I guess of being angry at an Adumbrae lol. - The funny thing is that the Mother Core is actually real here. - Yeah, I actually like Reo because he's probably closest to a normal person dragged into this situation that we have so far. I guess there's Ramon, but he has changed already. Reo can still be seen as a normal guy with the way he thinks.

OmniHumanist

Typos: He only had to get to the car first before Blondie would show up and they can quickly escape! -> He only had to get to the car first before Blondie would show up, and then they could quickly escape! "Hello," said a female voice as if in answer to the question in his mind. -> "Hello," said a female voice as if to answer the question in his mind. It was clear to him now that Corey probably saw something that scared him and he tried to escape. -> It was clear to him now that Corey probably saw something that scared him, and he tried to escape. ----- In the end, they were fraternity brothers, and they were brothers to the end. -> Whelp their lives certainly ended on the same day together. Life hack: Don't join frats. "I'm going to kill you!" the usually calm and collected Enrico shouted with all the anger bursting inside him. The girl—no, the Adumbrae—finally looked at him. "Die!" He fired his gun. -> This is the second time Erind has been shot at while being told to die. The first was Radi. Maybe they might actually hit her if they don't alert her? It reminds me of some shows where the characters reveal what attacks they are going to use. "Please, Mother Core," Yves prayed as he ran. "Please...I pray that I made the right choice!" -> Sadly religion didn't help him in the end. "DON'T CALL HER A MONSTER!" She stabbed the shovel into the hood of the car. -> Yeah, I agree with Deen! A true monster would throw a shovel so fast that it would kill a person who was trying to escape and didn't even engage in any fighting. With that said, isn't it sad that Reo is probably one of the most moral characters in the group right now? With the exception of Johann, Reo, and Dario, (Dario is a different case though because of the connection w/ the Professor) everyone else has tried to harm or murder innocent people on screen. And that's saying something cause Reo is definitely not a role model. At least Johann is still innocent in that regard. Does this mean Johann is best boi??? Thanks for the chapter, it will also be interesting to see how Erind reacts to Deen killing people.


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