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Erind/Deen - 5.7.2

🕑 Added 2022-06-27 22:10:30 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! Deen and Dad jokes lol. And only in a parallel universe can Erind blush.

OmniHumanist

Typos: While the two of us wore casual clothes, she still managed to look like a goddess while I looked like a random teenager out to walk the neighbor's dog to have some extra income over the summer. -> While the two of us wore casual clothes, she still managed to look like a goddess while I looked like a random teenager out to walk the neighbor's dog to earn some extra income over the summer. But that would make me look like a petty loser shit. -> But that would make me look like a shitty, petty loser. I was sure I was blushing so I turned to face the window on my side. -> I was sure I was blushing, so I turned to face the window on my side. Surprised that she didn’t press me about what I meant, I faced her despite myself -> Surprised that she didn’t press me about what I meant, I faced her despite myself blushing. But that means I win!" -> "But that means I win!" --- "You're excused," she replied with a giggle. -> This is a Dad joke Deen. I was sure I was blushing so I turned to face the window on my side. -> It's the first time we got Erind to blush! Thanks for the chapter!


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