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🕑 Added 2022-11-03 09:23:01 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! - And there'll be new side mission with Finlay around - Well, Deen is suspicious of Pino. It'll be funny if they fight in the end. I'm not actually sure where I'll take their interaction XD - Reason of GA is give Erind time to process how they're going about this with a Finlay puppet there. It'll be clearer next chapter why the GA wants a pause with the Finlay dummy around. - Some people want Finlay dead because he's too annoying, but I'm having fun with him lol. I'll have to see how I'll handle him.

OmniHumanist

Typos: Then it was more rooms—some doors were open, but most were closed -> Then there were more rooms—some doors were open, but most were closed ---- Why is my list of objectives growing? -> Side mission time! (Red blood…) That was the strong thought coming from Deen. Gnawing distrust directed at me. -> It'll be interesting to see what Deen's final thoughts of Pino are. I wonder how positive or negative they will be. There were two of them, likely out to investigate their nonresponsive buddies. -> Interesting how the GA wanted Deen to hide given that they should be able to handle the guards pretty easily. That guy has been alive for way too long. -> He's probably going to be alive for more shenanigans. It'd be funny to see him and Pino interact.


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