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🕑 Added 2022-11-21 12:09:06 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! Dunno how I missed those two words stuck together. - More Spin-off material, lol - Deen might to buy Erind jewelry too - Yeah, I'm actually thinking of having a Euphonia chapter, or maybe just half a chapter just to have a hint at what's going on with her side - Maybe Erind will still keep Deen in the dark - Let's have a buffet, lol

OmniHumanist

Typos: “The brains of innocentpeople,” I said with emphasis. -> “The brains of innocent people,” I said with emphasis. ---- “Speaking of friends, where’s the blonde woman with you?” -> Maybe Vanessa wants to join in the Erind x Deen action. “It’s supposed to sign that I’m fine with you keeping it. Yeah, also a sign that I’m alive.” -> It'd be really fun to see Erind wear the bracelet. “And your mother, too,” Vanessa said. “Saving her might means killing a few Tea Party people because they’re holding her hostage along with other Greaves corporate officials for their own thing. I don’t know what their plans are. I just know that if we get your mom, it’ll be messy.” -> It would be cool to have an interlude with either Erind's mom or Euphonia and see how they are holding up. “Yes,” I confirmed. -> What about Deen? Will she also join the 2M's lol? She doesn't want to leave Erind. The danger… this is going to be so much fun. -> Yum Yum! Thanks for the chapter!

Temple (REND)

Definitely going to be crazy!

Relai

Ahahahah oh man things are getting wild


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