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Erind/Deen - 5.19.4

🕑 Added 2022-12-15 13:41:09 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! - Erind could probably just tear her tendons and regenerate them afterward lol. Not sure how their "regeneration" would work here because Erind's body's no longer that flexible. - Maybe if Deen keeps pushing, Erind will really get mad. Though probably Erind's peak is just incredibly irritated, not actual anger. - Super powered slap! - Maybe Deen needs Erinds as her mother.

OmniHumanist

Typos: “Not fair.” Deen pouted. -> “Not fair,” Deen pouted. ----- “I’m sure it’ll return to you if you try. It’s like riding a bike or swimming. Just do it again.” -> It would be fun to see Erind being flexible and doing acrobatics. Deen wasn’t sure if it worked that way, but she wouldn’t dare try—her indicator was the urgency in Gabe’s warnings. -> Wonder if Erind will ever get aggressive enough? Stinging pain quickly radiated from her left butt cheek. -> She finally slapped it. “Yeah? Well, I’m disciplining you in their place,” -> Now Erind is the mom! Thanks for the chapter!


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