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Erind/Deen - 5.21.4

🕑 Added 2023-02-15 22:09:55 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

It's more like what's the standard for being creepy. For Deen, realizing that Erind doesn't have any lewd thoughts about her thinks that she's not creepy. In most romance stories, one guy can be a creep and another seductive even though they both do the same thing, but that's a different matter from here. XD

OmniHumanist

Typos: Many guys in the past would try something creepy with her. -> This sentence is pretty weird. I'm pretty sure Erind is doing something creepy, but I guess it's more like Erind will stop / Deen is fine with it? Unlike other guys. But I doubt Deen would let guys do creepy stuff to her in the first place ----- Deen crossed her legs behind the TV screen, remembering the sensation. Very ticklish. Her heart beat faster. -> Looks like Deen will develop a sexual attraction to Erind. Erind broke the silence. “Fine.” -> Erind is finally getting used to touchy feeliness! Thanks for the chapter!

Temple (REND)

Yep, Deen can be more messed up if let loose to the world. Just that Deen is following a script of what she thinks is right, but it'll get crazier if she doesn't have her own sister to act like her mother. Deen's character is introduced differently from Erind. Besides being a side character, she was supposed to be a throwaway character before and only came into being as a main one in Arc 4.

Colin Love

Damn I edited to say more but lost my train of thought when the edit didn’t show up. We’ll keep up the good work Deen is a very interesting character in her own right she seems so simple sometimes but then you get a peak at her dark past and her love for Erind and wonder what she is truly thinking. It might be possible Erind has bitten off more than she can chew with Deen if that girl ever truly snaps she’d be terrifying.


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