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🕑 Added 2023-05-01 11:27:03 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Maybe he's going to run for Congress next time. XD - Yeah, Domino is painting Erind in a bad light to better herself. Erind isn't exactly a good person, but she won't risk a fight. Hmmm, I suppose it's like the media painting psychopaths like animals even though they think clearly, just not in normal ways. - They're still the same person though. It's not like they're switching with each other. It's more like Domino is thinking that can't be me, and so views them as separate. I'm still not a hundred percent sure on how I'll treat this, but it's going to be interesting to explore. - Thanks for the help proofreading!

OmniHumanist

Typos: You should’ve pressed Jeffrey about it!I internally screamed. -> You should’ve pressed Jeffrey about it! I internally screamed. --- “I bet they’re discussing the misappropriation cases against Mayor Santos. They say the mayor funneled government funds to his brother’s business.” -> I wonder if he made up his career and has multiple fake names like Geroge Santos If Erind were in my shoes, Jeffrey would probably be dead. Better me at the helm. -> It seems like Domino is overexaggerating lol. I'm not sure Erind would actually risk breaking a fight out over here. Although I guess there was Eve, but it's not like Erind could easily flee from the scene now. She's stuck on a boat. There's no where else to go, and Erind has said she can't swim before. Domino and Erind are so different that Domino is beginning to think she’s a separate entity, pushing away Erind in the same way that Erind thinks of Blanchette going wild as separate. -> It'll be fun to see how Erind views Domino.


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