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ExD - 5.23.1

🕑 Added 2024-02-17 01:40:24 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! ---- - We can have some scenarios with sugar later, lol. - Erind can be considerate sometimes. - Deen just digging her own grave, or heaven.

OmniHumanist

Typos: I slowed down to check out more of the shop’s offerings, hoping there would Blanchette shirt—that was probably too much. -> I slowed down to check out more of the shop’s offerings, hoping there would be a Blanchette shirt—that was probably too much. Beauty privilege didn’t come with a pass to hurting me. -> Beauty privilege didn’t come with a pass to hurt me. What were going to talk about then? -> What were we going to talk about then? ---- Part of me wanted to get a lethal dose of sugar so I wouldn’t sleep in the same room as Deen later. -> Maybe Deen can give Erind some sugar to make her happy. “I’m going to sleep on the floor, and you’ll be on the bed. And before you object, I’m doing it because you’re the guest.” -> Deen should be glad that Erind didn't tell her to sleep on the floor instead. I strode forward and glared up at her. “What were you going to say, Amber Deen Leska?” -> Deen messed up again! Thanks for the chapter!

Temple (REND)

We're getting so much content per scene that the main story will grind to a halt if their shenanigans here are included there, lol.

Deadr0x

These are honestly so fun that they might as well be a part of the main story, the necessary character adjustments notwithstanding. They certainly are in my headcanon.


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