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ExD - 5.23.7

🕑 Added 2024-05-18 22:47:25 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! - Even in the main story, a lot of unintended outcomes happen, lol - Deen might be the more abusive one. - BDSM is scary since they're 2 superhumans haha.

OmniHumanist

Typos: I tried tonguing her, but she just babbling as if in a trance. -> I tried tonguing her, but she was just babbling as if in a trance. She’d make a V-sign. -> She made a V-sign. ------ “Shut up!” I furiously whispered at her. This wasn’t my intended outcome. -> That's a common theme in the spinoff lol. Won’t happen after the second time in a day? Those were the words of an abuser. And I thought I was the abuser in this relationship. Wait… relationship? -> Time to see who will be more abusive. Also, Erind is finally realizing her love for Deen. “I feel like I’m entitled to slap you,” I slowly said, raising my hand. -> Maybe Erind and Deen will get into BDSM. Thanks for the chapter!

Jayem

Well they’re both insane so honestly this development makes perfect sense. Weird relationship where both sides abuse the other but they’re actually enjoying it so maybe it’s healthy? Who knows. Also for someone who so desperately wants to escalate things Deen sure is talented at missing perfect opportunities in favour of messing things up 😆 Thanks for the chapter.


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