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REND - 6.48

🕑 Added 2025-01-09 01:30:28 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading! - It was easier for Frizzy Detective to shoot the face that close. - Erind is stretching things with Rule #4. Or rather, her claim to the world is expanding so it's easier to offend her. - FD is not an average guy, but I'm thinking maybe it's too much to make him a BID agent. - Check out my new story on RR. Also, once that story is stabilized, I'll get around to planning for the REND rewrite.

OmniHumanist

Typos: He wasn’t so bad a guy. -> He wasn’t that bad of a guy. Frizzy Detective wasn’t that shocked seeing still alive. -> Frizzy Detective wasn’t that shocked seeing me still alive. “You do know I’m just going to give you a fake name.” -> “You do know I’m just going to give you a fake name?” ----- Purple Banshee laughed in a grating high pitch. “I actually felt, you piece of shit. You’re a good shot, aren’t you? If I didn’t meld in time, you would’ve damaged my beautiful face.” -> Interesting that he finally decided to go for the head. However, I didn’t forget that Purple Banshee had to pay for taking my role. -> Interesting application of Rule #4 Or not so dead body. -> In before he's actually a BID agent or maybe something else. I’m interested only in my own survival. -> Seems inconsistent with what he said before to purple banshee. Wondering what his true motives are... Thanks for the chapter! Also, I saw on RoyalRoad your new story! Congrats!

Glowy3

Thanks for the chaper!


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