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ExD - 5.23.16

🕑 Added 2024-12-23 07:29:46 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help proofreading, especially on the cubicle!

OmniHumanist

Typos: “And stay in this cubicle…” -> Since this is in America, I think the correct term should be 'stall' instead of 'cubicle'. Of course, I wasn’t going to do anything. -> Of course, I was going to do something. (The next paragraph implies Erind is going to do stuff rather than not doing anything). ----- “You’re not going to wear a wet shirt, are you? And why are you hiding your boobs? There’s not much to hide.” -> Maybe Deen is just jealous of Blanchette. I found this side of her cute. -> Erind is truly falling in love lol. “Stop it, Erind,” she said in the barest of whispers. -> I noticed that Erind loves messing with Deen in public lol. It's crazy how much she can get away with. Thanks for the chapter!


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