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[REND] 16.1 - Fun Alone Time

🕑 Added 2025-07-28 15:30:49 +0000 UTC

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Karp Paul

“What if I can count—? Never mind. Shoo, shoo, you peeper!” - I can't really imagine native English speakers having this dialogue. While showering, I alternated between thinking about counting grains of sugar and my dream last night. I couldn’t remember a damn thing other than it happened. - This needs to be either cut or developed. For example, Erind could suddenly get an urge to count sugar grains (OCD kicks in in a weird way).

Temple (REND)

The Core is probably like antibodies fighting an infection? That said, the Core is also an infection. And yep, the corebring and adumbrae parts are fighting. This will slow down both while adding drama.

Temple (REND)

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Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Metal(Liz)ard🏳️‍⚧️

Is part of the reason erinds corebring power is taking so long is cause spookyerind is fighting the core over possession of her body. I assumed it was just a general adumbrae thing but this seems like the core is actively fighting for control


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