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[REND] 14.1 - Human Rights of the Non-Humans

🕑 Added 2025-07-14 15:48:13 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Deen's protectiveness of Erind's wins out here. - Edited the prof's dialogue. - On the scanners thing, I have earlier plans for that. It's even in my notes that it'll be imposed in school, issues with city protests, etc. But sometimes the plot goes this way first and then I forget that part or pushed it too far back. At this point, the chapters to insert it, or even places where to add chapters, are released to RR/SH. I think on matters like these, we'll best leave it to revising for a book release someday because it's a huge amount of work inserting scenes. Many thanks for the help!

Temple (REND)

Those who know the law, will know how to break the law. XD

Karp Paul

"I vote not to trust her." - since when did Deen become so reasonable? “What do I mean by the right to exclude?” -> He should not preface the topic like this. He did not coin this term, so, it is not up for him to decide what it means. -> "What is the right to exclude?" I am glad we are finally having a conversation about scanners. It is long overdue. However, I still suggest adding dialogue about how the scanners are useless into previous chapters, the earlier, the better.

Marquess

It's easy to forget they're both *law students*. Ironic, given all the shenanigans at the port that's about to commence.


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